Reviews for Melting the Ice
Ruby of Raven chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
A little funny in the end. Very cute. I loved it.
PePpErMiNt101 chapter 2 . 6/29/2008

angelthewriter chapter 2 . 5/18/2008
love it :D
Alaksandra chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
Marie chapter 2 . 5/17/2008
That was amazing!Please finish it !
JojoAvatard chapter 2 . 5/17/2008
This story was not in character at all. How could you say that? Zuko went from 'Katara, I would like you to forgive me' to 'Let's fight each other for fun' to 'I want to feel you up'. Don't EVEN tell me that's in character, and Katara wasn't either. The animosity she has/had for Zuko just cannot be overcome in like two seconds, and she certainly wouldn't make out with him like that.

Also, in response to one of these other responses... just because you are a Zutara shipper doesn't mean you can't criticize/complain about a Zutara story. That doesn't make sense.

Although Zuko DOES have very nice eyes )
chocolatepen chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
that was really cute! Go zuko!

please keep writing!
TheTragicFlaw chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
Your story was okay, a little unrealistic and OC, but it wasn't too bad.

You probably should check some of the spelling though in there. I found a handful of mistakes, most of them being the improper use of words, like mite instead of might, and so forth.
Laurel chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Cute .

but wheres the hurt and comfort?
Togira Ikonka chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
That was really good. I loved it.
charizardag chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
THAT'S AWESOME! Please tell me there's more
o0Che0o chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Oh, i liked it alot. Good job. I'll be checking out more of your work-if you have more A-TLA Zutara, that is.
SilverStella chapter 1 . 4/19/2008

They were in character the whole time!

Except for the make-out at the end.

But hey! I wouldn't be Zutarian if I complained!

It was Great!
ChipFest chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
lol. good one, zuko - "we should spar more often" haha.

A nice oneshot overall, though the part in the middle where it said 'previously...' kinda ruined the mood :(

but cute as hell.