Reviews for Linger
Limxuxu09 chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
It's perfect! Short and sweet! I wonder why you criticize you're own writing . If you this is not so good, I wonder what you would call my writing... Trash? lol kidding! Nice job! :)
greenteamoose chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
Hibari x I-pin is very cute. As is this fic. (I was shocked at how strikingly Hibari resembled Fon... or maybe it's the other way around. Though Fon looks gentler.)

DerangedCalling chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
I so wish this is what happened too
Hibari and Ipin forever chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
YES! a Hibari/Ipin fanfic, thanks for writing this! Wish there was more Hibari/Ipin fanfics :\
aisha89 chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
hey, great beginning! i love this pairing...plz update soon!
Satar chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
thank you for finally writing a fic that focuses on hibari and i-pin, i have to say ive been intrigued by these 2 ever since she gave him that chocolate..anyways i cant wait to see what you have planned out!
Dean Gabriel chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
KYA! *Dies of happiness* We need more of these fanfics!
E.M. Nemesis chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Good Lord, xxkoffexx-will the madness end? XD

You've been overworking yourself! What is this, the fifth one in the past week? Haha!

Well, I can't say I prefer HibarixI-pin to LamboxI-pin ( I know, I know-how original, eh?), but this was quite cute. Hibari's a sweetheart deep down, and you captured that hidden concern he showed for I-pin. Also ... augh! I'm running out of compliments, xxkoffeexx! You're too good for words, and that's the end of it. But seriously, slow down (not really)! XP
Garowyn chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
I'm glad you found the experience invigorating. :D Great work here! I feel kind of sorry for I-Pin (and envious, ha, ha), but I really enjoyed reading this.
nekoneko00 chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
definitely Hibari x IPin all the way!~

I'm looking forward to the next chapter/other Hibari x IPin fics of yours!~