|Reviews for A Failed Purge|
| 15dragondream chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
really nice story good job are u going to make a sequel
| MalachiteFlames chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
enjoied very much
| American Vigor chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
Wonderfully conceived alternate universe.
Quite plausible, at that.
Looks like Raditz' arrival was far more important than it's normally given credit for!
| DevilWearsJeans chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
This was really nice.
I loved the whole plot and how you wrote it out. Everybody was in character and you captured Vegetas personality well, which is not very easy in my eyes. Also this had really nice grammar and the whole writing style was really good.
Overall, this is a wonderfully written fic.
Best of luck,
| Space-Weazel chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
Overall, an excellent story. One of the *few* truly good challenge fics that revolve around this topic. The flow of the story is excellent. None of that dragging, prodding, weigh-you-down with crap that's not even relevant to the story as a whole. It's a bit longer than I realized (I'm poor at actually reading how long fics are... I just read them) but I didn't feel like any bit of this was tedious. There were a few teeny grammar errors, but those happen in like 99.9% of the fanfics on this website, so it's not even worth nitpicking in the least. All in all, good plot, good characters, good story!
| piewacket chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
I don’t know this fandom so I was a tad lost. However, the plot seemed to move along nicely and it was well written. Good luck with the challenge.
| Korgeta chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
This was amazing, when the story is so detailed and the drama is well in place then picks over grammar and such are irrlevent. In my view its clearly readable, was surprisingly dark and bold in its deliverance. My only nitpik would be raditz calleing nappa 'General' The saiyan trio are a pretty much a formal group save for vegeta who's royal blood demands he be called 'orince' even so in the series Nappa has alawys called him simply vegeta. Partly because I think he can get away with him saying so because their all freeza's servants and loyalty is paper thin.
I have to admit vegeta wishing back the homeworld, is it entirely of character of him? Vegeta certinely is a very uncaring saiyan, he acted like raditz never existed when he came on earth with the intent for wishing immortality, killed off nappa and in the budokai tenkachi 3 game, one alt time storlyline has vegeta smiling evily knowing his dad is dead and was as he intended it to be. And in the movie 8 of DBZ an ruse to make vegeta ruler of a 'new sayian world' was made (just to get him and the other Z fighters off earth to be killed by Brolly) we see a disastified vegeta heading to leave his 'empire' and would have hadn't goku came in and made brolly go pyscotic.
So if you are continuing this, bear in mind to what extent vegeta (apprently the son killing the father is a very saiyan thing to do) would want the saiayn race to return (or would he want nappa with him during the dragonballs or find he'll be ideally expendable just before that point). It could be possible that vegeta may face Turle (the saiyan that goku could have been) he is a movie character but he did come cannonicaly speaking after the saiyan saga.)
Brilliant nonetheless and I'm fortunate to read a chapter of a story that brings up a whole new area of possbilities.
| vegetio chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
One of the best stories ever, its fics like these that should encourage me to sign onto this site and add them to favourites! Or I could save the webpage of this story onto my files which I did :)
| Dimitrius chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Whoah! That's quite an action packed fic-a nice break from the usual romantic ones. I'm not familiar with this fandom since I don't watch the show at all but I have to say that I really like this Vegeta guy! What an amazing personality you've captured! :D
All in all, this was written very well, quite flawless actually. I enjoyed reading it and liked the transitioning of events that you made. This challenge was difficult but I think you managed quite well.
Good luck with the challenge. :)
| Evil Detective chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Good plot, I tried my best not to yell Vegeta's name when I read it. :P Well, good luck with the challange. ;)
| Beautiful Thief chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Excellent. I can find few faults in your writing, though my eyes are not quite trained to find fault in writing as high a standard as yours. :)
Your characterisation on the whole is very well done, and there is no OOCness apparent to me, though I admit to not being all too knowledgeable about the characters.
Well done Mini, and good luck. :)