Reviews for A Spark Torn in Two
Fangirl chapter 16 . 12/24/2013
The best tragic ending ever :) Thanks.
XxlKairalxX chapter 16 . 6/19/2012
This story got me into tears like seriously. I love this story. I really felt horrible for Wheeljack mostly because he was confused. You make incredible stories of him and Ratchet but this one was so depressing and lost in words for me. I loved every bit in it and I plan to read it again..
Nortstar chapter 16 . 5/26/2008
AW...

I love sad stories :love:
Dragolover1 chapter 16 . 5/26/2008
That's so mean! Why would you do that to Wheeljack? And Soundwave's dead too? NO! Oh the Who-manity! Okay, I'm done. What a story! You had me on the edge of my seat the entire time! I just wish you gave some actual closure for Wheeljack? Poor bot went through so much to become a vegetable. Awesome story! Sequel?
Dragowolf chapter 16 . 5/25/2008
Poor Wheeljack... Poor Ratchet... I'm close to tears. Very sad ending... but a very good one.

And I'm happy that Optimus finally understands all that Soundwave did to Wheeljack. Now Optimus will not call Wheeljack a tradior.

But how long will it take Wheeljack to heal? Will he ever heal? Or was Ratchet just saying Jack would heal to make everyone feel better?

Please let there be a sequel where Wheeljack gets better! Please... Jack deserves that much, right? Please!

By the way, this whole story over all was a very well written story that had a good plot, and well definded characters. And while a little dark at times (ok at some times REALLY dark) it was still good. I liked how you didn't have Wheeljack recovering instentaly from the attack on himself.

The is an exclent piece to your collection of well written stories.
Succoria chapter 16 . 5/25/2008
*sobs* It can't end that way! C'mon! One more chapter?

*cries*
AMAPADME chapter 16 . 5/25/2008
WHAT? The End! You Can not leave it there. COME ON give us something at least that Wheeljack will turn out ok. AH!

Soundwaves death was not good either. I just hope Megatron had to be carried away from that fight.

May I say again AH!
hbw chapter 15 . 5/22/2008
No! :( :( :(
Dragowolf chapter 15 . 5/22/2008
NO! Wheelajack cann't be dead! NO! That is... that... I need a tissue... I'm crying. Megatron killed Wheeljack... what is Ratchet and Soundwave going to do... can Soundwave even follow Megatron now that he has killed the one he loved?

Please tell me Wheeljack is not dead! Please tell me that he is just really really badly hurt and is in static lock! Please!

Poor Ratchet and Wheeljack... poor Soundwave...

More soon please! I'm still hoping for that happy ending! I will get one... right?

And I'm really not surprised that Wheeljack just broke down... it was all just too much...
Succoria chapter 15 . 5/22/2008
Oh my gosh! Wheeljack! Please throw up the next chapter soon! *sobs*
Neko Onna chapter 15 . 5/22/2008
AH UPDATE NOW!
AMAPADME chapter 15 . 5/22/2008
WOW What do you say to that? I am Now very Interested in seeing what Soundwave will do to Megatron.
Nortstar chapter 15 . 5/22/2008
OMG!

I'm lost of words...

I say that I love this story, Love love love love ...etc.

it is so fantastic, well...I can describe thta what I feel...It is fantastic...

please more :D
Gafthat chapter 15 . 5/22/2008
Oh Update soon XD I hope Wheeljack is still alive!
Neko Onna chapter 14 . 5/20/2008
Please get the next chapter up soon! Please let Jack be ok!
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