Reviews for The Outcast
moonlightstudio chapter 2 . 9/4/2010
Okay, so I think this story is one of the stories I am going to read in one night- because it is A-mazing. I loved this chapter just as much as I loved the other one. I think Bella wearing so much black really shows who she is, and how far off track she's gone since her parent's death and Jacob's betrayal. But that's just me. I also love the way you've introduced Edward, hope Angela's nice and becomes friends with her, even if Bella doesn't trust her. And Alice . . . cannot wait to meet her!
moonlightstudio chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
I was looking through fanfiction vids on youtube and I found one about this story and so I decided to read this. And I love it. The way her parents died was different to other stories I have read and I loved the way you used Jacob turning against her for a slut as the catalyst for her not trusting anyone. I can tell that this story is going to be amazing. Your writing is great, am really enjoying it already.
Kitty chapter 19 . 8/21/2010
-sobs- OH MY KAMI! Thats soooo sad! Horrible way to end it but i love the story! I cried soooooo much! I love it!
BlackoutLament chapter 19 . 8/7/2010
I HATE YOU!

How could you finish it like that?

HOW!

I have had my eyes glued to this story all day and she just dies?

I want to cry! GAHHH! T_T

Please don't take this as a negative comment, I adore your story (apart from the turn out) It was the best story I had ever read on fanfiction and the most sad and heartbreaking. You MUST rewrite the ending, just so I don't randomly start thinking about this story and start crying D:

PLEASE! DO IT FOR MEEE!

When I saw there was only one chapter left I was like. OMG SHES GONNA DIE O:

Then she woke in a hospital and I was like WOO maybe I can get the author to do a sequel.

Then she ripped the iv ot and I was like... wahh?

Then she said she had to leave and I was like NUUUU!#Then she saw Edward and I hoped he'd wake and make her stay. Then she drowned herself and I wsas like O.O !

Why couldn't it get to the party and Bella and Edward kiss? You could have ended it there and I'd be all like HAPPY DAYS!

Over all, FABULOUS story!

:3
DestroyTheStorm chapter 19 . 8/2/2010
she died :'( i loved this storryyyy sooooo much :) i hope you write your other ending too :D
singingstars chapter 19 . 7/9/2010
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OHMYGODDDDDDDD. I CANT BELIEVE SHE KILLED HERSELFFFF.

WTFFFFFFFFF. & EDWARD LOVED HER SO MUCH BUT SHE NEVER FOUND OUT MOTHER $#!&*(E#JWQ:CLDMKA:LDMSAL:DMAS:DAS:DAS:DASD.

*takes deep breath*

Good story

*goes off into corner and sobs*

/wrist
singingstars chapter 16 . 7/9/2010
dayum, wow. Kyle scares me... and he scared Edward..

...Kyle sounds hot.

8'D
singingstars chapter 15 . 7/9/2010
fdabdjsada.

whoaa, so graphic..

but it was sooo goooooooooooooooooood. 8DD
singingstars chapter 11 . 7/9/2010
Whoaaa, that WASNT Jacob. LOL.

Too much Eclipse *the movie* for meee. XD.

ANYWAY, WHAT THE EFF IS BELLA DOING?
singingstars chapter 10 . 7/9/2010
dfjaspdjdnaspnmsa;krea.

Jacob.

I never knew he was such a betch. xDD

but he probably had a reason for betraying Bella. ;o
singingstars chapter 3 . 7/9/2010
This is REALLY good so far.

I like that all the characters are total opposites from their characters in the book. XD

Edward...Lol.. a player...
Sleeping-Not-So-Beauty chapter 19 . 7/2/2010
NOOOOOO! SHE CANT DIE! she and edward didnt even have the chance to get together! they're all going to be so devastated!

keep writing, your amazing

nicole x
XxLadyReaperXx chapter 19 . 6/19/2010
...Th-that's it? She's gone?

This isn't the original then? Could you please tell me what actually happened?

I can't believe she's gone in this one...I thought she deserved to live, after all she's been through.
alicerox24 chapter 19 . 6/17/2010
Awwww I was hoping to hear 'bout da Halloween party! Oh well, great story. Are you continuing it?

Xxx

Iiiluvvvvevrybodylol. 3
Niamh Cullen chapter 19 . 6/8/2010
i really did like this story

i ust don't like reading stories where one of the main characters dies! sorry!

keep writing

this was really well written

well done!
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