Reviews for The Outcast
romance in the rain chapter 3 . 4/21/2008
I liked this.

Just a thought, you should really have Alice and Bella become friends before getting her involved with all the Cullens. I think a relationship with one of them at a time would really benifit the story.

Sorry for my little random ranting... I'm in my BETA mood right now...
romance in the rain chapter 2 . 4/20/2008
Poor Angela. I'm glad you brought her in though. I loved the Bella/Angela interaction in the books.
midnightwilight chapter 2 . 4/20/2008
Update soon!

It's a pretty good story.

ilovenaruto1223 chapter 2 . 4/20/2008
Great job sorry for not reviewing for the last chapter
Chrisy Nicole chapter 2 . 4/20/2008
wright more now! please!
BloodThirsty Butterfly chapter 2 . 4/20/2008
this is good. Very original idea. Continue.
CHEEKYCHIN chapter 2 . 4/20/2008

do we REALY need edward? *cough*

keep writing.

don't schools have non-religious based curriculum?

but then again its philosophy... :S
vampxpirate chapter 2 . 4/20/2008
dudee I wish I had a As I Lay dying sweatshirt, dude this story is the shit dude, totally awesum!
xN00DLES chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Great beginning. Can't wait for the next chapter. (:
romance in the rain chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
I like this. It sounds really interesting so far.
maximumtrouble10 chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
This is really good! Nice details! Jacob is such a jerk...:( can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!
xlynnx chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Seems interesting!
CHEEKYCHIN chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
how is she breaking the law?

gez. stereo-typical assumptions indeed.

keep writing.
NatTheHippieChild chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
awesome, really good!
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