|Reviews for phenix vs godot 2: enemies become friends|
| barrylawn chapter 1 . 6/14/2016
hey i no u ded but hopefully u become not dead becouse this is a funny story and i can see u have so much potetial
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
no bad stop
| demonprosecutor chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
Admittedly, you do need a bit of work on writing structure and grammer, but the plot has potential. With a bit of work, this could be really good :)
| Smart Aleckette chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
Um, you have no capital letters whatsoever. A proper noun, such as Phoenix, requires a capital letter. You also use them at the beginning of the sentence. And, um, no offence, but it was poorly written. Like, where's the suspense? Each paragraph could have been its own separate chapter, if actual dialogue, description, etc. were applied.
Also, the case's ending didn't make any sense. Do you have a betareader, a.k.a. an editor? Because I highly suggest you get one.
This really, I am sorry to say, killed me on the inside.
| Hon Hon Laughs chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
I agree, I'll try not to flame here.. But use proper grammar and please try to show exactly how did PHOENIX(Not phenix, whoever that is) get Godot off the hook. And there's alot of spelling errors in here too.
| Ioniclunch chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
... Um, wow.
You should be able to use correct grammar and punctuation at least. Don't you have a spell-check?
I'm trying to be as polite as possible, but you really need to STOP EXPLAINING EVERYTHING and SHOW it using SCENES.
Oh, and it's PHOENIX WRIGHT. Not Phenix.