Reviews for Modeling 101
Effie-a chapter 5 . 5/13/2010
This story awesome _ I love it and the storyline is really good . please update it soon!
Monochromatic Persona chapter 5 . 8/26/2009
Haha Shikamaru and Temari's love is just fantastic...

but killer XDD

I like the idea of this story...I do enjoy reading such genres

And modelling is ever so interesting.

Good Job and keep it up!

Chanel

P.S. Thanks for reviewing my fanfic! _
amber chapter 4 . 8/22/2009
what did those poor cookies ever do to ten ten
amber chapter 2 . 8/22/2009
yes, the guys are VERY brave
jocular monoceros chapter 5 . 7/19/2009
Lol okay you had me laughing / amused for pretty much all of it haha It seems a little rushed though, like you could elaborate on stuff like what the photos actually were but I think it's good. Good job.
msjezzi-bella chapter 5 . 7/4/2009
oh I like it, but generally support more of a NaruHina, good job tho.
msjezzi-bella chapter 2 . 7/4/2009
no Naruto-kun?
Lupita chapter 4 . 5/13/2009
lol this is a funny story i hope u update soon i wanna no wat happens next does its a funny story i cnt wait 4 the next chapter i hope u put a lil more of the couples update soon -
FaeSoDivine chapter 4 . 1/31/2009
Hey I like this!
NoxIris63 chapter 4 . 8/11/2008
I like the idea and story so far! Please continue and update soon!
overlordofnobodies chapter 3 . 6/28/2008
I like it! The pairing are good and idea is so far great.
Temari.fl chapter 3 . 6/20/2008
It was a great small chapter :) have fun on your trip :) love your fic!
b4ndg33k chapter 3 . 6/20/2008
wow, my favorite pairings, except for the kibahina thing. she so fits with naruto better!
xXxjustbecausexXx chapter 2 . 5/4/2008
Tehe... that was awesome! I can't wait until the next chapter. All I have to say though, is when you are combining sentences, try and make sure you don't use so many and's; also, try and form them a teensy better.

Like in the sntence "The guys huddled up and Kiba was bunking with Sasuke and Chouji was bunking with Shikamaru, they had sleep-overs all the time when they were kids."

Try to say something along the lines of, "The guys huddled together, figuring out who was sleeping where. Kiba and Sasuke would be bunking together, and Chouji would be bunking with Shikamaru because of the fact that they used to have sleepovers all the time when they were younger."

I hope you don't think I'm trying to be rude, I'm jsut trying to help you get better. Your story is really great though!
Temari.fl chapter 2 . 5/4/2008
it wasnt crappy i promise :) im reallt happy that decided to keep writting :) cant wait for update :) have a good week! i hope u get more reviews;)
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