Reviews for Focus
Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
Please tell me you'll write a sequel when he's in the cage. Like, him drifting in and out of consciousness and finally waking up.
LilNinjaWolf chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
Interesting. Never thought about what Leo might be thinking there. : )
Tori-chan chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
Very good :3

But they took some kind of stun gun (?) to him, at least that was what I saw.

But I think I liked this version better
Mikey's Kunoichi chapter 1 . 6/3/2008

This is awesome! I can honestly imagine Leo thinking this.

Danaa chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
I don't have any advice.

Just here to say that I like the little drabble. _
Dragon34 chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Nice. very nice.
caylender chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
I really like it! I love how you wrote this in Leo's perspective with his thoughts... It conveys a lot of feelings that the movie didn't show. Great job!
Tatsumaki-sama chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Wow. That was awesome! It's amazing how much emotion you can convey in a few short sentences. Especially at the end where Leo kept telling himself Raph will come, even as he falls unconscious.
miilky chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
just a drabble, one i really like. i wonder if that is what leo thought when he screamed.
kytyngurl2 chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
This is just utterly perfect and to the point. Very emotional, spot-on, and written just lovely! Great work!