Reviews for Denial With One Major Flaw
Avalondancer95 chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
AW! IT WAS CUTE! And that was one SEXY lemon! I WANT TO SAY THAT YOU SHOULD CONTINUE THIS STORY! But only if you have some really good ideas for future chapters! Beause I relly don't know where you could take this story that it hasn't already been brought to... but I really loved it was sweet and sexy! Pretty geat combo! *Wink* *Wink*
LoveCullen chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
Love. It.!
fitjess chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
Awesome. I like when Bella asks if he's ready now.
gallantcorkscrews chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
Do you watch Scrubs?

this is awesome.
o.oredeyeo.o chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
This one-shot is very close to epic. Congrats.
Sovoyita chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
Very good. I have never seen this one-shot before so when I read the summary, I was thinking, "Woah!" And then it all went down hill from there. Just kidding, you rocked it.
TwilightandCanadaforever chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
Abasketcase chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
Hey, not a big fan of lemons but I really like this story. You know, the whole background, and the characters. It's really well written! Cute lil oneshot! :)
puasluoma chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
The end was awsome!

very good story!

keep writing please! :D
amperstamp chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
I really like this sory!
penguinsleddings chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
Um, I think you've seen Scrubs at some time. Cross that - I KNOW it. It was good, but really, that like ALL happened in Scrubs, except a TINY bit different. (Edward DR. COX / Bella JORDAN / Alice CARLA / James Calyso.
Alejandra111 chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
LOL! That was funny! Loved it! So cute!
TheCullenCrest chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
Wow. (Gulps)

One of he best sex stories ever! you really know how write some.

Keep Lemon-ing!
silly bj chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
Wow. You write some of the best sex I've ever read. I hope it's from personal experience.

be safe.

I love youe disclaimer *laughing very loudly*
FreeTheFreesias chapter 1 . 8/17/2008

That was so.. Um.. Awesome.

Really. It was.
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