|Reviews for Denial With One Major Flaw|
| DarkWolf423 chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Too bad it was a one shot. lol Maybe you should look at extending it, i'd read it lol
| thewriterupstairs chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Wow. Very, very well written, and I loved the different scenes with Alice, she always makes me laugh!
No sequel, you say? I am disappointed! This was a great story, and it has the potential for more great chapters, but I can understand if you want to leave it where it was.
I really enjoyed it, you did a great job with Bella and Edward's personalities, they made me laugh!
| Angeliss chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
You did well. This was very enjoyable, and when I say very, I mean very.