|Reviews for For the Sake of Business|
| idiotlord chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
Story was really great. enjoyed reading it very much. hope you would write more about Apollo. 83
very nice job. cute and honest.
| Crystal Snowflakes chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
haha, this was very adorable to read ) me thinks you should add another chapter with edgeworth or maya o
| Autumn Thief chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
lol great story! Nice, quick, and full of funny laugh-at-Apollo quirks!
| Mister Mystery chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Not bad. The occasional confusion of 'their' and 'they're' and the occasional misspelling or grammar error, but with a readthrough these can be corrected.
The basic story is nice, but it is one that's been told before, so it would have to be extraordinary to really impress. It's not, really, but if this is just the opening of a multi-chapter series, I can't fault it for that.
I do love Cryptic Phoenix, and you nailed that nicely. But I also love Trucy, and she seemed to be an afterthought in this particular story. I suppose if you have trouble writing her though, then it's best if she doesn't figure prominently into what you write.
I did enjoy this, but I imagine the Edgeworth chapter will be better. As long as it's not Phoenix/Edgeworth. That's not to my taste.