Reviews for Marshmallows
xjadedjoy chapter 2 . 1/18/2009
Woah, the angst.

But I like the story.

Even though I don't think that's how her father would react.

I'd love to see more.
Bladed Darkness chapter 2 . 8/14/2008
Ouch, somebody needs to talk some sense into Robbie Ray it seems.
SMfan4ever chapter 2 . 8/8/2008
wow! that was... wow! keep up the great work!
wingsxforxmarie chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
I think that you've started off this story really great with the first two chapters, but may I give just a little criticism? I think that Miley's father was way out-of-character. On the show he has a bubbly attitude and he's always just very happy and running out on Miley and Jackson and then trying to kill himself are the last two things that I would ever think he would do. And I know that this a femslash story and of course there's going to be times that you'll have to write things out-of-character, but at the root of each person is still going to be their original characteristics, yet I have not seen any of those original traits in Mr. Stewart. I just think that you consider that. And I'm in no way trying to bash your writing, I just wanted to offer a little constructive criticism. But I do think that you're a very talented writer and I'm really interested to see where this story goes.
Truscott chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
Great start :).
Truscott chapter 2 . 4/21/2008
Great chapter :).
Xx.Get.Over.It.xX chapter 2 . 4/21/2008
Wow! Did not see that coming.

Update soon plz!
Stessa chapter 2 . 4/21/2008
Wow. That does not seem like Robbie Ray at all... Mhm. I wonder what'll happen now..
EveryVillianIsLemons44 chapter 2 . 4/20/2008
Holy smokes!

Okay now this story

has definitely hit that

point where I will be always checking for

updates. Great read.
usiylover2 chapter 2 . 4/20/2008
Everhart13 chapter 2 . 4/20/2008
Interesting and risky plot detail... but I'm definitely curious to see how you handle it, so update soon please!
AlvinFan07 chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
I definatley like what Im reading so far :-) Can't wait to read more
f00f00 chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Guitargirl007 chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Aw...I like it! Good start, I can tell you know how to write!
EveryVillianIsLemons44 chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Wow, please update this.

It was great.
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