Reviews for The Melancholy of Sora Kazano
MidnightxMusic chapter 9 . 8/30/2012
I reeeeally love this story so far! :3

But I think you switched point of views for a second when Roxas meet Olette. :D Not that it matters much...
HaPpY bAcKwArDs chapter 2 . 10/12/2011
Riku as Itsuki! :D
HaPpY bAcKwArDs chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
Haruhi Suzumiya Sora o.o XD
Sian Blue chapter 5 . 9/26/2009
exciting!
PikkaTay chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Hmm... Sora and this story remind me of a girl named "Haruhi" that ring a bell? 0_o

Oh well I still like this story just had to point that out, sorry.
LupinandHarry chapter 16 . 11/2/2008
I really enjoyed this story, it was super cute! I can't wait to read the sequel!
haretikers chapter 16 . 9/1/2008
FINALLY FINISHED! WHOOT!

Again, I loved all the characters (including Zexion). I loved Sora's impassiveness, Naminé's resourcefulness, Riku's endearing yet annoying smirks, and the adorable skittish Kairi. Roxas's inner ramblings were always the highlights of every chapter (it made reading all the more enjoyable, really).

I don't know how much of the story itself is original since I have never before heard of "The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya" but I liked the concept all the same. Plus the narrating style was very cool also.

But... I found that I'm the type of reader that also enjoys some sort of romance. Throughout the whole thing I was waiting for either of the following things to happen:

-Kairi admits she likes Sora and confesses to him. (I mean, she practically let him put his hands on her).

-Sora admitting he likes Kairi. (He referred her as a turn-on! The brain doesn’t decide whether something is sexy or not. The body DOES! And Sora’s body was sure reacting)

-Riku admits he likes Kairi (as if their acting in the movie didn't hint it enough).

-Roxas admitting that he wanted to be the person Naminé woke up to every morning. (He always felt like if she was lonely and wanted to do everything he could to accompany her).

-Kairi and Roxas going on another date and kissing. (He always felt the need to protect her. She always felt the need to make him feel comfortable).

-Sora, out of jealousy, realizes he is in love with either Roxas or Kairi when he sees how affectionate they are with each other. (Roxas and Kairi had many scenes where they looked like a couple).

PS: And to tell you the truth, this is the only story that had made me even consider Kairi and Roxas as a couple).

And finally…

-Roxas and Sora having some sort of sizeable progress in their love life. (I mean, they kissed ONCE, but that was just a dream to Sora. Plus the main reason Roxas did it was to escape the parallel universe).

What I’m trying to say here is that although I LOVED the story, I don’t think I’m going to read the sequel just to then read the sequel to that one, then again just to read the sequel to that one so that finally in the last chapter Roxas and Sora may maybe do something that somewhat vaguely suggests that those two might consider that just maybe they like each other in some way other than simply club members, and just maybe, decide to go out on a date. I need results and their love life is progressing painfully slowly for me.

Again, AMAZING story, but I have to go. Later!

PS: Please don’t take this as a flame because it isn’t one. I didn’t hate nor disagreed with anything you did. I liked it all! It was just missing that special something I need when I read a story. (ROMANCE!)
haretikers chapter 10 . 9/1/2008
*sighs* and here I thought that "Sora's Latest Fancy" was Roxas. I guess wishful thinking gets me nowhere.

Still, this story is amazing and everything else that's possitive but (and a big BUT, at that) it's progressing really slowly on the Soroku department.

When will the Sora/Roxas scenes actually start?
haretikers chapter 8 . 9/1/2008
Just checking in to tell you that Roxas's sidenotes made me laugh through the whole ordeal. Later!
haretikers chapter 7 . 9/1/2008
*I held my left hand up because I have a question* "What's a gaffer?"

I truly don't know.

Oh, and I know Riku let Kairi win!

Amatuer porn, lol, though interesting, I don't think the school festival would allow it.

It's funny how relaxed Roxas is, knowing that his life is in constant danger and all. I can't wait to see what will happen if sora ever finds out about his ability. Plus, not that I'm complaning, but i would like to find out Sora's thoughts on Roxas are.
haretikers chapter 6 . 9/1/2008
I'm just going to say that I really like the characters here.

But quick question, what was it about Sleeping Beauty that made Sora want to return to the old world? Sora and Roxas would still be in the new world so why return to the old one? Not that I'm complaining because I do like Kairi, Riku and Naminé a lot.

So I'm guessing Roxas's role in the club is to avoid destruction?

Later!
haretikers chapter 5 . 9/1/2008
If the chapters keep being this good, I'm going to have to review every chapter.

I guess with the mentions of the nobodies, this fic finally started to feel like fanfiction to me. And seriously, this fic is great. Your writting style is amazing here.

the golden line in this chapter for me was...

-Sora looked over to me and I looked over to Riku who looked over to Kairi. We were being rather childish at that point-

That sort of thing happens to me all the time.

Now I would go on stating the various hypothesis I usually have when I read a chapter but I have found that for every question I ask there is an answer in the very next chapter so... I'll kept my questions to myself for the time being.

And although I should be doing something else right about now, I think I'll go ahead and read yet another chapter.

*sighs* It's nice to feel speacial, isn't Sora. I empathize with you there.
haretikers chapter 4 . 9/1/2008
"I’ve heard that it’s better to regret something you did than to regret something you didn’t do."

Amen to that.

y'know, I really enjoyed how much riku's smirk ticked off Roxas. And Kairi, she really offers no resistance to Sora, does she?

Loved the fight scene, and really, where do you come up with this stuff?

-His sword sliced across the front of my jacket and for a brief moment I wondered how I was going to explain this to my mom-

That line was golden, as well as several others.

This story really doesn't feel like fanfiction, y'know, it feels like it could be in shelves at a local bookstore.

Anyways, what I'm trying to say is that I'm sure as hell am going to fave this. Later!
haretikers chapter 3 . 8/31/2008
Whoa! When I asked all those question in my last review I didn't expect to receive this kind of answers. Simply, "WHOA!"

It's funny how you incorporated "autoevolution" and "timequake". I guess scrabble works wonders. So Naminé’s an alien, Riku’s a psychic, and now Kairi’s a time traveler. Really cool stuff.

But aside from the "Sora chose you, Roxas," I still didn't get my answer of why Sora chose him. I'll guess I'll probably find out next chapter, right?

Anyways, it's 2:00am so I should probably get to bed now so... later!

But before I go, let me add you to my favorite author list.
haretikers chapter 2 . 8/31/2008
Okay, I'm currently reading this fic but I just had to stop to comment on this.

OH MY GOD! OMG at Sora refering to Kairi as the "turn-on" essentials of the club, LOL at his explanation of why they needed Kairi, and LMFAO at how Sora used Kairi to blackmail Pence.

So why the hell does this story has so little reviews? I'm telling you, this chapter alone could reel in anyone who ead it.

AMAZING!

But now I'm really curious. You see, Sora is in the club because every club needs it's leader, I guess. Kairi is the "turn-on" and Riku is the "mysterious exchange student" probably because of his silver hair. Every club needs their unnofficial member, so I guess that's Naminé's role. So now I'm wondering, why was Sora so insistant that Roxas joined the club as well?

Tah, I wasted too much time reviewing when I should be reading. Later!
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