|Reviews for Mass efct: The sheaprd epic fight causs kill geth!|
| GregtheGuest chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
You spelled, almost everything wrong! And it makes no god d *n sence! Are you a special needs kid or something!? (No offence) Spell check is a thing you know!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/7/2014
My I.Q dropped 10 points.
| lost faith chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
i should throw you with a dictionary im sorry that is how it is
| American Blondie chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
um... i really don't know what to say. The grammar was absolutely horrible, and I couldn't follow one bit of the story.
| Fire Dragoon chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
This is the best story in the world.
| Zarunai chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
This is a joke, right?
I checked out your other 'stories' and they're all the same. So I'm guessing you're just doing this to try to be funny. Maybe to knock the fanfic community? It was amusing for all of two seconds, and then it just got old. You've had my five minutes of attention, which I'm guessing is what you wanted. Now go and find a community that you can ADD to rather than make fun of.
| Rascarin chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Okay, not really sure what was going on there. Your spelling is atrocious, and from what I can work out, the story makes very little sense.
In future when writing fanfic, please try and make your work coherent.
| GOWnerd chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Learn to spell I could barely understand this, and lets not go into your grammer!