Reviews for A Subtle Seducing
Azamiko chapter 2 . 5/21/2008
XD Oh, this just got MORE fun! I can't believe Naruto's plan is working! I bet stage two is him talking dirty or something!
Moola Deena chapter 2 . 5/21/2008
I laughed so much when I was reading this. Poor Sasuke, even his brother is against him. XD I love Itachi. And stalker!Naruto is so cute. Only he would get the idea to use molestation like that. And Suigetsu is the sweetest ever. I really feel sorry for Sasuke (not, since I laugh my ass off at his suffering).

I'm really curious as to what step two in the Plan (
yamanana chapter 2 . 5/21/2008
you are a genius! I absolutely love your story here, I was so sad when I reached the end of the second chapter that I yelled a huge "NO!" yeah it was that bad! But I haven't read a good humorous story in a long time. What makes it even better is the fact that you haven't made it blantantly obvious, nope it is well written and you have the characters down pat. I could honestly believe naruto to be a perverted train molester! Great job, I'm looking forward to the next one!

yamanana
endiahna chapter 2 . 5/21/2008
I can not say that I have read anything like this before, it is really good though. Oh man, Naruto is such a stalker...
Chibi-Chaaan chapter 2 . 5/21/2008
haha... Itachi makes me laugh. XD

and Suigetsu too... how does he break in anyways? he just... does? it's funny how he's got this whole routine going on. XD and cute.

update soon, okays?
Katsheswims chapter 2 . 5/21/2008
Great chapter! I can't wait to read the next one! I wonder what the next step is? I imagine that if Naruto skipped a day or 2(but was still there undisguised to watch) when he came back Sasuke would react differently. I hope the next chapter comes out soon! I love this story!
Halskr chapter 2 . 5/21/2008
Only Naruto would choose molestation as a pick-up line. This is so funny. Thanks for writing and sharing this.
noinnocentvictim chapter 2 . 5/21/2008
Ha, Naruto just won't give up. What an idoit.

Loved the chapter, it was so funny.

Update soon ].
Shizuki54 chapter 2 . 5/21/2008
I love it XD! It's so cute XD! So I'm guessing Sasuke's Uke XD!Is he XD! I hope so XD! Sasuke's so cute XD!Please update soon XD! Can't wait to read the next chapter XD! Please update soon XD!
1273 chapter 2 . 5/21/2008
I love suigetsu! he is so funny

amazing chapter as always... keep up the good work!

I can't wait for the second phase of Naruto's subtle seducing...
Dark Green Poop chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Hahahaha! I loved the ending.

"His marvelous solution was:

molestation."

LMFAO this fic is awesome! Hope you can update soon!
65416 chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
Hiyas!

Oh, Wow! O.O

This story is looking ReaLly GOOD! w

An obsesive Naruto is always a good step for an awesome fic, and after checking out your profile, I'm quite sure this is gonna be an espectacular one! ;)

Can't wait to see how Naruto's "modus-operandi" turns out xD

Poor Sasuke, though... he was screaming for molestation parading around naked (in his own bedroom, mind you, but with the blinds WIDE OPEN!... He was asking for a stalker... well, another one xD

Hope see you soon

Ja nE!
xXxUchihaL0v3rxXx chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
I've just got to love this story! I thought it was a one-shot because of the ending but I'm glad it's not! Mwahaha, molestation xD Gotta find out...
XxYaoiLoverForeverxX chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Oh. My. God. You so can not just leave it like this you MUST update soon please! I'm hooked now!
Chibi-Chaaan chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
oh yes... VERY subtle. XD good one Naruto

I like this so far~
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