| Reviews for A Subtle Seducing |
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   xrosepetalsx chapter 1 . 4/25/2008 OMG! I'm dying to know what happens! UPDATE PLEASE! Midnight Mourner They'll never know who I am |
| icedtea chapter 1 . 4/24/2008 omg the last part made me laff hard lmao0o0o this is AWESOME! |
| Jj chapter 1 . 4/23/2008 This fic sounds great, I cant wait for the next chappy! 3 |
| sidfunuv chapter 1 . 4/22/2008 this is hilarious, keep writing more. |
| LastRain chapter 1 . 4/22/2008 wah~ such an interesting plot! Please continue, I loved it! and I like your writing too _ |
| Lapse - Raevn chapter 1 . 4/22/2008 xD That last line! This is -hillarious-, Naruto's such a pervert. Poor Sasuke won't know what hit him~. Awesome job. :D Can't wait to see what you have planned! |
| LittleSkull chapter 1 . 4/22/2008 aw, sasuke is the molested uke? the poor sod xDD Id love to see what will happen next...and i hope that naruto will survive his brilliant action xDD |
| cfox chapter 1 . 4/21/2008 all right another long fic by the queen of excellent FanFiction on this site at least in my humble oppion. I like how this is going and how you have Naruto being all sneaky and cute in his quest to catch Sasuke. Looking forward to more. |
| themesh chapter 1 . 4/21/2008 Wow...just...oh my god...wow...LOL, XD, LMAO! I love how you potrayed Naruto and Kiba's relationship! It just makes you want to feel really bad for Kiba, yet you want to cheer Naruto on! XD, Kiba's going temporarily insane! And, I love the fact that you said Sasuke came out of one of the ladie's manga's, it makes him seem less girly and thank god Naruto isn't girly either!(I hate it when they make them way girly and OOC)So, I urge you oh-so-much to continue this bunny, update whenever you can, I would die, go to heaven, die again, go to hell, and then come back to Earth! X3! -Meshi! |
| Sophie Thrower-of-Rocks chapter 1 . 4/21/2008 Oh, that made me laugh and I so needed it! I don't see why Naruto's (or narusasunaru fans) never used the fact he's waited so long that he's turned gay! That was amazing, and I really wasn't expecting the molestation. I also liked the fact you used Kiba to tell the beginning, that was a nice change! |
| noinnocentvictim chapter 1 . 4/21/2008 Ha, only naruto would have a plan like that. I wonder if he'll receive a black eye next chapter ]. For someone whose mother tongue isn't english, you're damn good at writing in it. I could never write like you in French. Anyways, good start, hope you update soon ] |
| MayIFall chapter 1 . 4/20/2008 Hahahahaha. Molestation? That is brilliant. Naruto is such an idiot. XD. I love this chapter! It was so hilarious. Sasuke is gonna kick his ass ne? Great prologue on this one! Totally won me over. I love NaruSasu to bits an pieces. :] Can't wait for the next chapter! Hope you update soon. |
| lydia-chan chapter 1 . 4/20/2008 ok, i laughed so hard at this story XD haha it was just really funny :D *is still laughing* |
| Sabaku no Sable chapter 1 . 4/20/2008 hahaha. only naruto would think of a plan liek this. |
| TheRobinsNest chapter 1 . 4/20/2008 LOVE IT! Naruto is such a pervert! heh, and the shower scene, hot! Love the first chapter, I couldn't stop shaking my head at Naruto's choice of seduction though, but with Naruto it was kind of expected. Great fist chapter I'll be looking out for more! |