Reviews for Save me
May-Ruzuki chapter 17 . 4/12/2014
That was SOOO HOT! OMG!
Im sad that Allen bought that book and they never used it though. :(
FallingBreathless chapter 17 . 6/3/2013
The lemon scenes were a good read, but I still felt like Kanda was a jerk. He should have apologized to Allen for the initial rape, and I thought that more should have been done to make up for it. The icicle also was a bit too much for me. It was sadistic...

Other than that, the plot was very interesting and I loved how you described Toma. It made me laugh.
alicemomiji chapter 17 . 4/30/2013
Nosebleeds is an under statement! I think i mentally fainted from lack of blood!
Edlinal chapter 17 . 3/24/2013
*nosebleeds.. Wow... I love your fic...
Alfred F. Jones World Hero chapter 17 . 12/21/2012
Loved your story. Thanks for sharing with us! 3
Alfred F. Jones World Hero chapter 5 . 12/21/2012
That was hot!
Foxluna chapter 17 . 12/11/2012
haha ya this was a really great lemon! wonderfully done -has a huge nosebleed-
well let me know if you have any other stories or one-shot's of this couple? please and thank u!
in the previous it was extremely funny how even though Toma was straight HE got a massive nosebleed from seeing Allen and Yuu in bed together, after they had sex. -giggles- then having to crawl outta the room -giggles insanely-
flygon3300 chapter 17 . 4/15/2012
thks for the present lol

loved the story mostly
TheLeftPhalangy chapter 17 . 8/15/2011
TheLeftPhalangy chapter 16 . 8/14/2011
Lol, Toma's so far in the closet that I think he just entered Narnia.
Bunnyillusion chapter 13 . 5/15/2011
Loved it~

cant wait to read the rest
moshimellow chapter 17 . 4/18/2011
An icicle? O_O

Man that's gotta hurt...

Great story overall.. 3
ShirukuKage chapter 17 . 8/7/2010
I'm sorry I didn't see how that was Allen's present. It seemed only about Kanda's pleasure as he raped Allen with an icicle and left him "torn in some places and even oozing some blood", I didn't see any real indications that Allen like rough sex so to me it clashed closer to rape. I'm sorry people (and author) please don't hate me for saying it, it's only my opinion.

Your story structure and attention to detail are quite good, keep it up. But please if you're going to keep writing stories with rough sex in it, indicate that both parties are into and enjoy it (not just with body signals, your body can be aroused even when you are not). Thanks for your time.
pnginlvrs chapter 17 . 6/24/2010
That is so hot and so sweet at the same time!
si5544 chapter 17 . 2/18/2010
(o_O) *suffers from massive blood loss* an icicle? I officially love you
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