|Reviews for Nice Girls|
| D chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
very cute ending!
| Kitaliah chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
Haha, Good work Harry.
| Abbigail Cross chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
I've noticed a sort of trend in your stories.
When you read them, and you read them with a touch of humor, they sound like a comedy show. I like it!
| hashtagnofilter chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
i love this story so much.
hermione, in the story, reminded me of me, if i had a crush on one of my best friends. cuz im not really into makeup & designer brands & crap, and much rather prefer books.
&stories like these make me love harry/hermione.
i think it's perfect the way it is. :D
definitely an awesome story.
| Rebakah chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
Cute! Liked how Harry read an entry but nothing that gave it away, just showed him he was being an arse. The kiss was perfect, (snort), Great job!
| the punchline chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
the best harry/hermione i've read yet!
you wrote it amazingly! Very in-character, too. I especially loved the kiss, it was so real :D
thanks for the great read,
| 03DC chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
| Yenniixx chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
This fic is great! I, especially, liked Hermione's journal entries and how she and Harry interacted with one another. I think it was sweet and it had just the right amount of fluff in it! Good job! Two thumbs up for you!
| someonestolemycookies chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
characters were a little OC but i loved it anyway :) congrats on a good story !
| andi chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
nothing has two syllables...therefore Hermione's reply could not have been monosyllabilic.
| Marita28 chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
I give you two thums up (id give you more but i only have 2 hands) i love the way you write, seriously, you are a very good writer... well off to read some more of your stories!
| Paws.on.scroll chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
*laughs* You know what? I'm really liking your humour! I even liked how Hr slapped H for 'groping'. Then how they continued to banter about 'teaching' and 'making up 10 fold'. If I ever feel abit blue, I'll read one of your stories along with a couple of others that always get me out of my funks. Thanks for posting this.
| Novelteas chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Loved the hilartiy at the end, very profesionally done..um one question though..does Harry ever get a good look at what is in her "journal" *cough*diary*cough*
Just wondering its not an inportant question but just thinking off-the-page.
| Anon chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
Ah just wanted to add that perhaps a little bit work into characterization wouldn't hard. Harry, Ginny and Hermione are still OOC but it flowed better in this one than the previous ones.
| Anon chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
Ah the writing in this one is much better and even the characterization.
I normally can't stand Hermione to be honest. Obnoxious, vindictive, rude insufferable psycopath IMO ... but I did enjoy her here. Which is a first. Only thing is, I dislike the continuous Ginny bashing I see in your stories so I guess this is the last one I'm gonna read. It is possible to write stories without bashing characters and calling them names you know ? Sucks, because I was trying to find a decent Harry/Hermione fiction. But no big loss obviously.