I liked this version much better! When I come to that episode in watching that season I always skip it. It's not really that bad, but I love the main team as much as you do! Thank you so much for this story!

Thanks for this. Trio was just the first of many mind numbing episodes that I'll only skim through again to catch any interesting Sheppard or Team moments. Feel free to rewrite other Sheppard/team deficient episodes. ;)

Hi Ali

I've just found this when checking to see if you'd finished the story about the earthquake. I didn't care too much for Trio what with Shep being side-lined to a minor role so THIS was much better. Very well done.

Now, get back and finish those stories!

Kitty

What a great read; such adventure and drama without ever losing the humour. And the ending was just perfect!

*happy sigh* Thank you for writing Trio as it should have been. This would have been such an awesome episode, instead of a slightly tedious one. *huggles Shep, Carson, and Rodney*

This worked so much better - good job!

Really great story - I liked it better than the actual episode, couldn't stop reading!

Oh this was excellent! I loved it!

Yay, a much better ep, than what we got, this ep I would have watched on repeat. Good idea and fab story :) So do you plan on re-writing anymore eps that were Sheppard lite and had potential? :)

What a pleasure to read. I couldn't stop laughing at all the amusing banter and then when Rodney used his powers of persuasion on those boys - it was priceless! However, I do realise they are in a dire position and I am aware that time is running out for them, so I'll cut out the giggling and concentrate on the more serious side of this brilliant story.

A nice blend with the boys on this episode. Hehe the boys trouble pain :)

that's some mighty fine writing you have there :D Liked it :D

I really enjoyed this story. I think that it is totally cool how you changed the original episode to make it take place with Carson and Sheppard instead of Carter and Keller.

This story works really well with the three of them. I like the changes you made to fit it to them and the parts you've fleshed out (creating the seat for Sheppard, lowering him, getting him out of the shaft).

nice rewrite lol :)

Great fic, loved it! Better than the real epi, since this has much more Shep ;)