Reviews for Breathing
i dont even chapter 7 . 2/25
dead FAngirl chapter 7 . 2/1
Omfg so saaad! I cried!
DatCrazyFangirl chapter 2 . 1/27
Wow. If I learned I'd be dead within a month I'd cry. And cry. And cry. After that I'd probably... hmmm... cry.
Lazy American Person chapter 7 . 1/6
Im not gonna cry... Im not gonna...
FullMoonOcean chapter 7 . 11/30/2014
I love this fanfiction, brilliantly written, but maybe you should put a trigger warning in the description.
Guest chapter 7 . 11/7/2014
Nooooooooooo! So sad :(
BlackCatNeko999 chapter 7 . 3/12/2014
Wow, so this is the end? I don't know what else I actualy expected. I mean it was obvious she was going to die in this last chapter, but not like this. However the ending was perfect like that. Poor Hikaru.
You did one amazing job! Keep it up!
Mon Esprit Libre chapter 7 . 11/29/2013
thank you
Kristi chapter 7 . 7/28/2013
:'( so sad but a very awesome story in my opinion
orangepumpkins chapter 7 . 7/30/2013
I've got to say I'm a bit confused about everything but I cried regardless because this fic reflects so much of life. The pain, the sorrow, the unjustice of it all, and the need to move on were all just coveyed so masterfully. Kudos.
Orange H chapter 7 . 7/27/2013
NOT okay.
(But for some reason I loved it regardless ;)
Guest chapter 7 . 5/10/2013
Sad. dislike the end were she dies. Sad but touching story
ShadedStarlight0 chapter 7 . 1/28/2013
This is so sad. It made me cry. I kind of wanted the five percent to be her. I feel kind of bad for Hikaru being alone when she died.
Xenat25 chapter 7 . 1/1/2013
This was so tragic and touching and REAL! You write the emotions of the characters so well, it feels like you are there with them. Thank you for this story.
AniMe-n3rd-O-O chapter 5 . 12/27/2012
This is so interesting! Intriguing! Awesome!
Absolutely touching and dramatic!
And you barely have any grammatical errors to distract the readers!
There's a lot of suspense
-and this is probably not the word I'm looking for-
but maybe also a bit of turning-of-age embedded and integrated within the story
that is easy to relate to as teenagers!
I love it, and can't wait to read your latest works! D
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