Reviews for Beaten Affections
Amethyst Emerald chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Uncommon pairing, but I liked it. I know you meant for this fic to be a one-shot, but it's got potential to be a really great multi-chaptered story. :D

By the way, "excepted him into their gang" should be "accepted him into their gang."

"Except" and "accept" are two different words, though they are pronounced similarly.
azab chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
i loved it
Tears of Eternal Darkness chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
this is a very nice set up for a story. i know you probably only meant it to be a one-shot but i think this could work well as a chapter fic if it's written right (which i think you could) i'd like to see this continued.

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