Reviews for Haunted
Ayla-tan chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
good story

I really liked it :)

A nice reason to live on- though I'd have hoped he'd want to live...but considering his personality...that's probably excactly what he thinks: that he does not deserve to live...T_T
soni13 chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
ah...angst. wonderful, wonderful angst. i seriously need this stuff to survive.
nksa chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
the last few lines were amazing.
MoonStarDutchess chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
Brilliant! I love his musings in this and how you had Roy almost knocked from his chair, Maes still knows how to handle Roy even if he's dead.

Great work!
YamiKatie chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
(cackle) I really have corrupted you...first in causing you to join me in a FMA obsession, then a doujinshi obsession, and now'll be learning Japanese and throwing Kanji back at me next.

This was like a little snapshot into Mustang's despair - short, but intense and packed with emotion. Keep writing, and try to be ambitious, because then you end up setting the bar higher and higher and achieving more.

Have to get back to lecture now; you know how attentive I am in them, after all.