Reviews for initiation
nat300 chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
:O...
JoVersify chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
ha ha ha...you think like me!

You should read my new story I posted, I think you would like it...A LOT! Check my profile...it's the only one up there so far.

This was fun...and funny. A bit too short though...would have liked a bit more detail on the entire thing, but it was FUN nonetheless!

Thanks!
estelin chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
this was excellent. keep up the excellent work and writing. i am now going to read it again.
dazzled01218 chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
lmao. that was..oddly.. erotic. hmm. i kinda enjoyed it. lol ]
watermelonflavored chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
weird but funny :)
KediRox chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
nice!...i would have never thought of that, very very creative
ggggggggggggg chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
very very very OOC but very very very hot.
popcornandstarbursts chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
i think i just died.

that was hot.
Shenice10 chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
THAT WAS GOOD. BUT IT WAS SO WRONG, WRONG, WRONG. COME ON THE ENTIRE FAMILY, WHY. NO REALLY WHY THE WHO FAMILY, EVEN THE GIRLS, I'VE GOT NO PROBLEM WITH IT BUT WITH BELLA AND SHE DID EXACTLY WHAT THEY SAID LIKE A PUPPY. THIS IS KILLING ME, BUT IT'S YOU STORY SO SORRY IF I INSULTED YOU, JUST AN OPINION! _
Sammicles chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
interesting family traditions but i think that its a great story.
supernatural-princess17 chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
im sorry but that was gross
theregoesguts chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
lmfao, that caught me COMPLETELY off guard.
chrissyhale chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
lol i dont even no what to say...i defintaly wasnt expecting to read that...thats for sure! lol

crazy...
bitten-sln chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
i just have to say..its hot as a story but...it has nothing to do with the book, they are so out of character...anyways its still a hot story...
Wildrose Sesshomaru chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
WOW! that is all I can say... ok maybe not all... I LOVED IT! i think it might be cool to see more like maybe someone else getting inutuaion lol hope to see more soon from you! _
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