|Reviews for The First Step|
| heylalaa chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
such a cute story. loved the interaction between nick and maya here. :)
thanks for the fic.
| Burninghammer63088 chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
Dude, I felt that was terrific. It was well written, cute, Not too mushy and just all around bodacious.
I liked how you wrote maya, grown up now. I could picture her being like that in the game. I wish her and some of the other charcaters were in Apollo justice. Dinnae get me wrong they were cool but I do have a soft spot for the originals. I'm glad you mentioned them in this story. Top work mate. thanks for Posting.
| Maya and Phoenix D chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
Finally! Someone mentioned Nick's obsessive-compulsive behavior to scrub toilets! D Wonderfully written )
| HawkofNavarre chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Waah, beautifully written and a great one-shot for PxM after AJ. Nice work!
| nine force chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
Beautiful. I Love your Phoenix/Maya stories. They always get me. Keep up the fantastic work.
| smileysquirrels chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
beautifully written :D
| Sharubii chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
Aw, this is such a cute story. :3
| Mister Mystery chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
Wonderful, as always. A little groan-worthy during the confession but at least you acknowledged that.
I don't think it's your very best work, but it's just good to see you writing again. I hope to see more in the future.
| Crystal Snowflakes chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
Thanks for writing this ) This was amazing, like all your other Phoenix/Maya fics )
| Sapphire Rose E chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
awe that was cute! thanks for writing
| sara haruko takenouchi kamiya chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
Good and sweet as usual Toby, it's always good to see some more of your work.