Heya!
This fic is amazing, because it's written in Axel's POV, and you did a really good job here. I've read a few fic with Axel's POV, but this fic is just the best! Axel's character is portrayed exactly like how I imagine him. The story is also amazing! Great job, fella! ;D Have an amazing day!

Really good really good and so is the sequel!

Really liked this story but i think i loved the ending the most! It was really good!

Love the story! Been hunting for a good AkuRoku fic and came across this :) Axel is simply hilarious. Haha.

Lexa...

That sounds kinda hot.

this was funny ) but to tell you the truth i'm only reviewing to tell you that i, have in fact, eaten sea-salt ice cream for breakfast P

Axel... RENO! OMGWTFBBQ!1!1!ELEVEN!

*spazez out* sorry. I just squealed when I figured it out.

lol i'm so dumb i dint notice axels last name till ou said it xD nice start :3

Ahh, this is hilarious and perfect and just...wow. I was laughing the whole time XD Good job!

What to say except that this awesome and that before I joined , I had this bookmarked so that I could click myself straight to it whenever I felt like reading it.

I just like every bit of it. Seems like you had fun writing it and I have fun reading it. It's the details that mean so much. They make something good into something very good.

You capture Axel's character so well. I love how the narration occasionally gets sidetracked with him. And thank you for not making Sora an innocent little ditz. Crushing on a relative (and not being ashamed of it) pretty much destroys any purity in him.

Oh, and I usually get annoyed when writers do this: fsjhlfjsr230480sl. To describe somebody's reaction or mental process (or lack, thereof), but it really fits your style.

"We want our violence." I quote Concrete Blonde's song Violent. Axel and Roxas are guys, after all, so they're not gonna be too careful with each other. Their rump on the veranda table is so fucked up it's pure gold. Stuff like that does actually happen in real life.

"I was very aware of the party in my pants right now. Hello stiffy. Ohmyfuckinggod, I was fucking aroused by this goddamn kid." I can hear those words as I read them. So friggin' funny and insane.

Wish I could make more sense. What I'm trying to tell you is that I love this story, the way you write and I promise to review more of your stuff when I actually can think of something new to say.

When I read this, I was so happy that, in this life at least, Roxy and Ax could have a happy ending. But then I read Lengthy Drives and Stupid People AND Crimson and Clover and I was like, "HELL no! You can't DO this to me! I demand a refund! D:

Actually, I've had sea salt ice cream for breakfast. I made some of a recipe I found. Then next morning, I was hungry! What can I say?

Love the story!

I LOVED THIS

LOVE

this fanfic has even gained me and a friend the inside joke "table sex". ;3 can't wait to talk about this with friends.

did i mention that I loved this? XD

ha, very nice

...they do? x3 What? I've yet to taste the deliciousness that is supposed to be Sea-Salt Ice Cream. I've been told its god... huh, I can eat god now? ...AWESOME! XD

Wows, eventful chap! :3 Wee. You fic is crack to meh...how DARE you have this special ability to force my brain to review to you! XD Apparently I don't mind. -blinks- o.o; What the heck is wrong with meh? Ah wells, Idk. I'm just odd like that. 3

Yes, I SHALL TASTE THE DELICIOUSNESS (or god apparently...) WHICH IS SEA-SALT ICE CREAM! ...well enough of that rant.

Aw, poor table. D: But, I really kinda don't feel that bad for it. Sora's family sure are heavy sleepers! XD

Ooh, our Roxy is a bad boy? :3 Hmm. -sparks idea, but it is quickly dissolved- Dang... Ah wells. -sigh- 'Parte Deux'(or Parte II) was full of teh wonderfulness and win. Sorry that's just my way of saying 'this fic fucking rules' or the cute way of 'So WONDERFUL!' In a totally caffinated form. -nods approvingly- :3

Wow, you've earned yourself quite the long review here. -blinks before applauding- Cheers to you my friend! -smirks-

What is this you say? A COMPANION FIC? Whoever requested it has the best mind in the entire freaking world. Aside to the other -cough- ones I've mentioned that have the same. Now you included!

-laughs a bit- Your sense of humor astounds me to no ends! Meaning its like crack, except the good kind that half-messes you up and may also end up with you causing yourself self-abuse from falling over or on things. Damn nightstand! Stupid lamp! Do NOT hurt me when I'm trying to laugh my ass of my own bed thank you very much! D

XD Yeah, so that's that about that. ...wow, how many that's were there in that sentence? 1..3..11... ugh, my brain hurts. dx Ah wells. -sigh- That's pretty much all I've gotta say. ...I think anyway. -grows a bit scared of my utter randomness- So yes, here you are. -gives you a twizzler- What? We've got like -sniffs- Like, I dunno. NINE packages? Well at least its not like our freezer which HAD 15 boxes of waffles.

150 waffles in total as my sis would say. She did 'er math, that she did. :3 Murr.

So yeah. That's it! ...again I THINK that it. -blinks before shrugging- Welp, as I say to everyone whenever I freaking review 'LUFFLES YA!' X3

-Bread-chan/Kiesha