|Reviews for Black Dwarfs, Blue River|
| ffaforlife chapter 30 . 11/20
I'm a relatively new reader of yours, and I'm working my way through your stories. I've enjoyed your writing so much. :)
I seriously love this story so much! It was so much fun to read, beginning to end. I love Edmund tons. :D
I'm looking forward to reading more of your super awesome writings. :)
| narniac4aslan chapter 30 . 9/25
Can I just say WELL DONE! This was a delight from start to finish and I absolutely adored it! :D
| Guest chapter 30 . 7/8
This was absolutely wonderful!
| Guest chapter 30 . 5/15
You have no idea how much I love this.
This fic is completely amazing, with the right touches of humor and friendship. Also, it's well-written, too. I could add a whole list of other things about how this is wonderful, but that would count as flattery, I think.
You wove a spectacular tale.
| Diligens chapter 30 . 5/12
This is a fantastic story, I read it all in a day.
| MaryChapel chapter 30 . 4/20
Shot through the rest of this all at one go. Thank you so much! ! !
| MaryChapel chapter 7 . 4/16
Love Ed's letter! Sounds like he had some real "What was I THINKING! ! !"
| MaryChapel chapter 6 . 4/16
Baia was really cute. :) Well done!
| MaryChapel chapter 5 . 4/16
WOW! Ed seems to have the patience of a saint. I'd have hightailed it outta there!
| MaryChapel chapter 4 . 4/16
I really like the sisters' notes to Ed. Very nice touch.
| MaryChapel chapter 2 . 4/16
I think you've written the Black Dwarves very well so far. Reminds me of Nikabrik. :)
| MaryChapel chapter 1 . 4/16
This looks really good. :) I greatly enjoy your work so far, and look forward to reading more of it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/1
One of the best stories I've ever read on Fanfiction. Great characters, humor, and story. I'm also going to say some praise for your writing itself - not only was it grammatical, but it felt effortless, and I wasn't distracted from the story by thoughts of how forced or awkward it sounded. Bravo.
| thebeautifulbicky chapter 4 . 3/1
HAHAHA that was a good chapter. You showed ed's character perfectly
| thebeautifulbicky chapter 1 . 3/1
It took me a few paragraphs to figure out who the narrator was (again). But it's a promising opening chapter!