This looks really good. :) I greatly enjoy your work so far, and look forward to reading more of it.

One of the best stories I've ever read on Fanfiction. Great characters, humor, and story. I'm also going to say some praise for your writing itself - not only was it grammatical, but it felt effortless, and I wasn't distracted from the story by thoughts of how forced or awkward it sounded. Bravo.

HAHAHA that was a good chapter. You showed ed's character perfectly

It took me a few paragraphs to figure out who the narrator was (again). But it's a promising opening chapter!

i really just stayed up til 2am to read this instead of studying as i should have. absolutely loved it

this is just so. . . so. . . gah. Can't stop reading. so beautiful! SO stunning! Never stop writing. . . ever. . .

And so Nancy rode off into the sunset with his three siblings.
Awesome story!

I have very much enjoyed reading your story. It has fulfilled for me the purpose of stories - to lift up my imagination, to bridge the gap between reason and emotion. I have not enjoyed reading a fic so much in a long while, and I thank you for the gift. Your writing sinks into my imagination so that it is not words on a page I see, but one adventure of a boy on his journey to becoming a king.

The best Narnia story I have ever read.

I don't know whether you wrote this poem or not, but I like it. It reminds me of The Parting Glass.

I cannot say how muchi love this story. I adore the Dwarfs, the bats, Ed, but most especially dear Nancy

I was utterly captivated by this story. It was thoughtful, instructful, humorous and a nice extension to Narnian lore. There were so many points throughout the story when I just nodded to myself, saying, "so true" or "how insightful" or "fantastic dialogue". So thank you for taking the time to write this treasure. I hope you've written other Narnian stories because I was quite sad for this one to end.

thank you

Oh my goodness, how can one fic be so beautiful? *emotional keyboard mashing* I'm so past the point of coherency right now it's not even funny. Just... the Edmund! And the Black Dwarves! The noticeably researched smithy! And the everything! THE EVERYTHING. I love it all with the intensity of a thousand suns. Thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful piece! 3

Again so good! I can only imagine brickits thoughts as I believe that this is also the night when Edmund gets stabbed for the first time in Into the West.