|Reviews for Wish for Power|
| jaelin910 chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
so...why was ranma depressed? I'd have expected him to use the confidence based moko takabisha rather than copying ryoga with the depression based shishi hokodan
| tray125 chapter 12 . 7/22/2013
awesome story hope there is a sequel
| death of snipers chapter 4 . 4/21/2013
look, I can understand ranma being a ss, but RYOGA!? i'm sorry, but thats pushing it
| death of snipers chapter 2 . 4/21/2013
your a good writer and i wish u had more confidence, try practicing more complete crossovers, even if u dont post them. it would be interesting, i also find your minor mixes with japanese and english interesting, especially scince I know at leats passing amounts of the former
| death of snipers chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
great fanfic so far, i just have 1 question, if he is a saiyan then shouldnt this be labled as a ranma, rosariovampire, dbz crossover and incude some more characters?
| shugokage chapter 12 . 4/5/2013
Amazing story and great job on the unique story and making everything flow beautifully!
| shadowmccloud chapter 3 . 11/25/2012
what happens when things go Abra Cadabra at Hokus Pokus?
take your pick.
| Gundamknight100 chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Did Ranma just say Bad day like Jackie Chan? Cool and also seeing Ranma go Super Saiyan was also awesome!
| Ranmaleopard chapter 3 . 1/11/2012
this is extremely awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
| Zhuullgmail.com chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
You need to stop right now and study some more English. You've got tenses all over the place, incorrect conjugations of every other word, and just plain wrong word choice so often this is nearly unreadable. I mean seriously "spanky"? Were you high or did you just want to make him sound like he was three years old?
And the lest said about the random Japanese you started putting into the dialogue the better. Seriously, horrible things should happen to people that do that, don't do it again!
| Shinzochi chapter 12 . 2/15/2011
AWESOME Story (_), i hope there will be a sequel to it cause i would very much like to read more.
| Kuno-Baby chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
The author's note at the end of this first chapter caused me actual physical pain because of how cliche'd it was.
| Yew chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
It began as a few (very rough) ideas for how the prologue should look. Then continued on to look like a very bad attempt at some funny parody.
All that and I'm not even sure I read more than a thousand words. This was just bad. Really bad.
English not being your first language isn't even a viable excuse. Sure even I noticed a few misspelled words and faulty grammar from what little I read, but that's not what was so incredibly bad. I've read stories with worse language, and enjoyed them quite a bit. So don't delude yourself into thinking it was the language that was so bad I couldn't read and not the actual "story telling".
Language is somewhat acceptable. Everything else just sucks.
| EspyLacopa chapter 6 . 2/9/2010
Go go Super Ranma!
As for Id. . .I stopped reading shortly after Id got his hair cut. Man, Losing the mis-identification jokes that Id dealt with was so sad. . .
| Randoh chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
Ah... the whole exploding aura thing is a bit... overkill.
Ranma is already powerful enough at the end of cannon. He should, at least, be able to go toe to toe with a full blooded vampire. No need to go overboard with the powers.
The thing is, if he is that powerful already, then you either have to craft the story in a way where he has to deal with that powers and leave everyone's skill and power the same, or you have to make his opponents stronger than they already are. To beat them Ranma then has to get stronger while the next challenge is another more powerful monster. Ranma had to get stonger AGAIN to beat the monster... ad infinitum. It gets silly really fast.
There are also a bunch of other things wrong. Grammar, sentence structure, etc. The review may seem harsh considering that there are a lot of worse stories out there. Its not an awful fic, the negative comments are due to the fact that the fic is actually salvageable.