Reviews for Wish for Power
Sdarian chapter 4 . 11/3/2008
This... has really lost my interest. While it could have been somewhat interesting (as it looked like it was going to be a Ranma/Sailor Moon cross), having Ranma a super sayian? using the wrong names for his moves? having Ranma enter the end of the Rosiaro series, then move back towards the beginning? now having Ryoga be super sayian?

It's really getting to be too much. While I can understand and be fine with several stories where Ranma has Super Sayian power levels (regardless of if he's a sayian at all), that's in response to various threats that appear. Ranma Killed Saffron as a human. Fine. Ranma is super powerful. Fine. However, Super sayian power levels is planet cracking powerful, and there is no need for that here. None at all. Really, keeping Ranma as human would have fit in far better. Super Sayian powers deal with world ending threats and giant spaceships of doom or invasion from another dimension of whatever. Not some minor demons (as said, he killed a Phoenix God (as a human) so he doesn't need those levels of power to deal with a minor 4 tail kitsune).

Ah well, this could have been good, but it just didn't live up to it. Better luck with your other stories.
James Birdsong chapter 12 . 11/2/2008
*Just plain applauds the 12 chapters regardless*
Maximara chapter 2 . 11/2/2008
Power is a relative term here. While the Saiyan are powerful there are plenty of beings who could pound them flat without breaking a sweat. Z of the third Tenchi OVA comes to mind as does the Valgav-Volphed-Darkstar being of Slayers Try. In comics there is Mad James Jaspers (Marvel), Myxzptlk (DC), Anti-Monitor (DC), and Necron (Marvel) who all have universe or even multiverse effecting powers.

Then you have subtle power as with Yakumo from 3X3 Eyes who cannot be killed (Saiyan do get killed and then somebody usually has to go DragonBall hunting to get them back). Or the power of the Millennium Items which can be used to send people into the ShadowRealm or turn them into soulless zombies.

So no matter how you slice it the Saiyan are nowhere near the top of the power scale.
J. Palmgren chapter 11 . 11/1/2008
Bit annoying but then once you start going the DB route things will spin out of control. On the subject of Shampoo: Time for Ranma to dress up like a ninja and just cap that bitch. In public!
Princess Asuna chapter 11 . 10/31/2008
i dont care if english isnt your first language your telling one hell of a story so far and i am loving every moment. I do hope the youki girls show up again that would be awesome. I would have been more surprised had shampoo NOT entered ranmas class by the way. Anyways update soon
Ruzio chapter 11 . 9/24/2008
One thing I've noticed so far is that you call Ranma "he/his/him", even when in female form, thus making it fricking impossible to now what form he's in.

For an example;

"As he hops in, as soon as he touched the water, his curse activates turning him into a male once more."

Please tell if someone ells doesn’t find this sentence; .Nonsense!

Rewrite it and change it, for the love of god!
gaul1 chapter 11 . 8/22/2008
interesting story so far, wonders if ranma will use his other capsules that washu gave him, and the training room, and the doorway, keep up the good work, byes
Lord Arkan chapter 2 . 8/18/2008
Update soon.
PEJP Bengtzone chapter 11 . 7/23/2008
So, how are you going to make Ranma and Tsukune be able to help the Sailor Senshi without becoming two new ones? Well, anyway, I hope you keep yourself updated, so, good luck, and keep going on!
PEJP Bengtzone chapter 10 . 7/23/2008
Here's some updates for your vocabulary: (Never mind those below #3)

1. Do you mind?/You don't mind?

2. Sei-/fuku

3. The Japanese money is called "Yen".

4. Pichi-Pichi

5. Network Navigator/NetNavi


Every race-like name is spelled with first letter being big!
Zsych chapter 11 . 7/1/2008
Good stuff, although I think you could've gone with less than Saiyajin ownage.
ranma-chan-14 chapter 11 . 6/27/2008
Nice chapter, he wouldn't need to kill Akane's body if he killed Shampoo first right? Wouldn't the corpse stop being controled if the summoner dies?

plz plz plz update fast! _
ranma-chan-14 chapter 9 . 6/26/2008
Can't wait for the next arc, also can't wait to see Nodoka's reaction to Kuu! -

plz plz plz update soon! _
dastryin chapter 8 . 6/22/2008
heh so far so good looks like 1 hell of a good fanfic keep it up btw i also play rohan online wat server u play in
Bobboky chapter 11 . 6/22/2008
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