Reviews for Behind Closed Doors
tianakiana chapter 1 . 3/29
KCRose17 chapter 6 . 7/7/2017
Oh wow that was hot. Can't say I fully like it but far from hate it at all. Thank you for posting it.
KCRose17 chapter 5 . 7/7/2017
LOL That that ending is so funny. LOL Sorry can't stop laughing. Okay it was a lovely story and no need to add or take away anything. Thank you for posting it as I loved every moment of this one shot.
KCRose17 chapter 3 . 7/6/2017
Oh I don't want to kill you at all. But I would like it if this one was turned into a bit longer piece of work. I love it and would like to see what kind of ending it could have other wise. Don't get me wrong it is fine the way it is. I just really have my mind asking things like where else this story could go? And would Fakir and Ahiru ever become something more? Or would Fakir fully push her away? Just so many things kind of deal. Anyway thank you for posting this up. I really have enjoyed reading it.
KCRose17 chapter 1 . 7/5/2017
Oh wow that was nice. Kind of make me wish there was a part two or something to this one. I really do like it and your writing is so very well done. It was clean writing with a good strong feeling behind it all. Thank you for posting this up for those like me to read.
Reiko x 3 chapter 4 . 3/31/2017
This has the strongest story to it out of all of these. I feel it could be made into a multi-chapter work easily. You are under no obligation to do so, of course. I just feel like the potential exists and wanted to point it out. That being said, I enjoyed it as it is.

The minimal focus on the sex actually works for me. Mostly because I have no experience with such things myself, and likely never will, which leads to a failure to relate. *shrugs* I'm asexual and autistic. Between my lack of interest in either gender and my aversion to physical contact... You can see the problem. I swear, the whole reason I read smutty things is because I have no other way to satisfy my curiosity about this whole area of human existence I know nothing about. At least my college psychology textbook answered some of my questions about how love works... None of them have helped with the sex thing, though. So frustrating...
Cosmic Rabbit chapter 9 . 1/11/2016
Awesome, awesome! Beautiful, romantic and so our characters! Will definitely read if anything is updated (;
Aokushi chapter 1 . 9/26/2015
Thank you for not making it a banana.
PrayerGirl chapter 9 . 6/10/2015
These are good! I love the love!
anon chapter 9 . 1/1/2015
It's been almost year :'(
Elisablackcat chapter 9 . 6/3/2014
ah i just love your chapters XDD too bad i can't think of anything! ill be waiting happily for the next chapter though
OtakuGirl95 chapter 9 . 5/14/2014
you should do one of Fakir and Ahiru where Ahiru is a maid and Fakir is the master for the "behind closed doors" story and call it "Forbidden Love" or something like that.
Guest chapter 5 . 3/20/2014
The /only/ problem with these fics are that a girl's first time should not hurt. If it hurts, that means theyre doing it wrong.
A hymen will stretch (not break) if you do it right. So the first time should not bring pain, unless someone's doing something wrong.

That is literally my only complaint.

Everything else about the story is wonderful and written well and true to character. Thank you.
starkreactor chapter 7 . 3/6/2014
Well. Fuck. That was extremely hot.
Kingdom's Oathkeeper chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
This is so cute xD
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