Reviews for Study Break
fangirl713 chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
that was really something and I like the bit of humor in the end above all I give this a 100! A plus plus thanks 3
Guest chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
This was perfect! 3
I loooved the ending (were he sneezed)
though, I would have loved if haruhi took a little dominance in him, to see him get flustered if she sucked him or something, either keep on writting stories like this its great konami .
Not much a poet chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Great story. Since they said that they felt like they were dying, it might have been interesting for Tamaki to reference 'le petit mort ' (he being half-french and all) (look it up, im not going to be vulgar and explain it here lol)
InuYashaOuranKyoFan chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
It's funny how she has a condom. I bet she was dressed as a dude when she bought it. Lol
LonelyDreamer7 chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
Aww... This was very believable! I can actually imagine them being like that during their first time xD. Poor Tamaki! Sleepless you and rejuvenated Haruhi!
Coffee isn't my cup of tea chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
Oh, that was great! Why is there no more HaruTama love...? WE NEED MORE OF ZEE HARU/TAMA LOVE!

Thank you anc have a nice day
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NonieBee chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
haha loved it completely in character
awesome from start to finish :)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
but hes her daddy no no i wont stand for this at least involv momy
Jill chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
Wow. I had forgotten about this ficlet. I had previously read it a few years ago and just found it again. I have to say that I'm stunned at how amazing you are as an author.

Your voice for the entire story is sweet, light, and genuine, just like the anime/manga. You not only nailed the characters but understood them inside and out which added to the story itself. I love the bit about Tamaki's love of history and language because they both are used to create and appreciate drama.

This line says it all, though:
"The thought wasn't completely new, but tonight she felt it solidly, more so than she ever had. It was somehow satisfying. Haruhi Fujioka wanted very few things with much conviction, and she could now honestly admit to herself that Tamaki Suou was one of them."
That was perfect, in character, and pretty much sold everything else. Also your ability to write an intimate love scene without making it feel forced, squicky, or hardcore pornography needs to be commended. I wish more authors were like you, whether it be original works or fanfiction.

Thank you for sharing your story with us. :)
Mahersal chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Oh my goodness! This is one of the best lemon stories I have ever read. Seriously. It didn't feel rushed or forced and it actually sounded realistic. It was awesome! Nice job!
bananafrappe chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
teehee... "I'm gonna die..." lol that's just so unbearably Tamaki. love it.
Janey-Paininator chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
That was an awesome read
schmaslow chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
Aww that was sooo gooood! Absolutely adorable and hot at the same time :'3 amazing job, I was having trouble finding many fics that have these scenes written well like this :) you kept them in character really well! and Tamaki was so cute xD
Guest chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
Wonderful! Inspires me to go read more of your writing!
SoulEaterSushiBomb chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
Best lemon ever! :D HaruhixTamaki forever!
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