dude you suck. read a lot of stories. first off. you have 7 chapters and it took one year for that. thats pathetic. second. you provide no details about what happened with freiza.. just face it u suck

omg! i luv this story! u and kidgoku and dbzrocks have the best stories ever! never EVER stop riting and ill never stop reveiwing!

suspence!

hola me gusto muchoi tu fic pero fue duro traducirlo y leer lo me tarde un buen me gustaria ver a goku en otra prespectiva como un estratega o algo similar si podrias por favor ponerle a tu historia qe goku acepte lo qe los sayayines le dicen pero despues el con su padre los tracionen con un grupo qe no asepten ese gobierno seria gracioso ver esa prespectiva podias hacer un fic para todos los latinos en español

Nice. Please update soon. Try to work on your grammar.

cool!

o_0! I don't believe it! You finally updated! *happily dances* I was wondering if this day would ever come! *is being melodramatic on purpose XD*

Anyways, you're too hard on yourself. This is a very good chapter, and I'm curious to see what happens next. The only problem is that you might leaving me hanging for almost a year again. XP

YAY! Awesome chapter. :3 But one thing I noticed; Master Roshi said basically the same thing twice. :P

GWY!

-KG13

update please!

Good Story, i like it now just waiting for the next one

U to the P to the D to A to the T to the E...Just kidding take your time, I just hope you haven't abandon this...not that not updating in a long time means that one plans to abandon anything. *cough* *cough*

Good chapther, and yes, it was long enought at least in my opinion.

I like how you're managin to change what happened without going OOC with the characters.

Now to see what will happen now that Piccolo has apeared and it seem that Bardock is recovering and is going to wake up.

Actually no I didn't think you were going to get rid of Piccolo so fast, even if I have no way to prove it! :P Your chapter title had a question mark first give away. lol :P Plus DBZ is littered with scenes where characters you think are done for make a come back. :D

Anyway this really is a great story...I have to admit I'm a little finicky with AUs probably because there so dam popular and overused with the HP crowd and a lot are not well thought out. :P

I like how you made Frieza's defeat as believable as is can be, in the Namek saga he might have been beat earlier if Vegeta hadn't coaxed him to transform. It takes him a little time, and he has the tendency to underestimate his enemy. So I suppose it might have been possible abet unlikely. :p

Your fights scenes are awesome, and all characters seem in character. You keep the "feel" of DBZ in your fic, which is hard to do I think. Although, Piccolo and Goku's fighting powers are really in the six hundreds, they're wearing weighted training close remember.;)

I'm really liking this story!

Finally! an update, very action-packed. they acted like saiyans to me

Good chapter.