|Reviews for Harry Gets His|
| SomeGuyFawkes chapter 1 . 2/4
| Exivus chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
Now this Harry Potter would be worth writing a book about!
| readerboy7 chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
obviously not DH compliant. definitely OOC for harry.
| RedTideZero chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
Well, that was pretty damn dark. Pansy may have been a bitch in cannon, but it's never fun to have your heart toyed with like that – I imagine even less so when you loose not just your love, but everything else as well. It would have been easier to swallow the situation if she was just using him for her own gains only to have it backfire on her, but she claimed to have actually loved the guy before she died. I guess making the story any less harsh would lessen the utter ruthlessness of the Harry you were trying to portray. An interesting idea and well written, though slightly disturbing to read.
| Hachichiyyin chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
Disturbing. But it's really good. An great example of manipulation. From Harry Potter no less...
| deleted2012 chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
That twist was awesome.
| john777 chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
| misfiredcanon chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Well, if they still awarded rep points at DarkLordPotter, you'd probably be receiving some from the DLP gang.
| jbfritz chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
| David Fishwick chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
Dark intense idea and Harry was definitely cold here. Thanks for writing as I enjoyed reading this.
| Space Odin chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
| demonicnargles chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
Most amusing. And dark. I like it!
| colin chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
That is pretty awesome I could see a story come from this.
| anaknisatanas chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
I loved how cold Harry was. And the ending was great.
| peregrine1989 chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
I looked at your page and my eye's widened with shock. I am totally amazed you actually completed a fic.
Admittedly you also finished that piece about Harry and Neville's Mum, but still, you finish a fic. I may actually get the guts to post one at Dark Lord Potter next. (Oh wait doing that on the 25th.)
Now onto the real review
Anyway, other then a minor issue with a word repeat, roughly end of the 8th line, repeated his, the story has little to no spelling or grammar errors that I could spot.
Its plot is also quite good with a nice twist at the end.
I also like the greed we hear from Harry in this. Most people assume that the Potters are made of money, and thus it is refreshing to see a fic where Harry has need of money, and will marry someone to get it.
I give it a 4.5/5. While I usually don't give a damn about spelling or Grammar as I myself am terrible at it, that repeated word really broke the story flow, and any spell check should have brought that mistake up.
And I don't like giving out 5/5s.