Reviews for NaruSaku Drabbles |
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![]() ![]() I loved this chapter, but I did not understand the beginning of the chapter. But, in all I love this story that is being made. |
![]() ![]() Excellent fanfiction. But it needs improvement. still awesome. |
![]() ![]() Dis never ,when was i his ,Jiraiya is his godfather/Sensei[i think]. |
![]() ![]() Your writing style needs a lot of improvement. But since this one is from 2008, I bet You've improved already .all the best for your future projects! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was alright, you could describe more in the romantic sense though. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So you make their kid die before them, huh? Eeh, whatever. Anyways, not much... romance per-say in that one but it was okay. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice drabble. I like it. |