Reviews for Of Violence
xHakumeix chapter 29 . 5/10/2009
I just want to say I loved this fic. I have read many of your others but this one just blew me away. I actually cried when she died and he had to tell the kids. I had been avoiding this story mostly because I'm not a Ichi/Rukia fan and try to avoid them but after reading your first chapter/warning I just had to continue. i love your other fics too. Thanks for the great (if emotional) read.
staid waters chapter 28 . 5/8/2009
Very well done, and not just as a story (although it stood out there too, as being well organized and written, with strong, consistent characterizations.)What really stood out for me was how it was practically a guidebook to how to handle life when shit happens / how to handle a falling apart marriage with as little damage to all involved as possible.
Ida Cippo chapter 29 . 4/22/2009
It's nice having this questions posted. To be perfectly honest I had forgoten too about them but they allowed me to think back upon your story with fresh eyes.

I will admit having wondered upon the main theme of spousal abuse, especially seeing that it was no the man abusing but being abused. I can only say from my point of view but I do believe you got many main aspects surounding this violence right.

Again, "Why Rukia"? was also a question I have wondered about. Especially I wondered if it had to do with her being among the only female character Ichigo takes orders from. I liked your explanation.

Strangely the question about Rukia's death wasnt so present in my mind. It seemed, as you have explained, the "shorest" way out of the whole situation.

I have one question, if you do not mind.

Why did you choose to give Rukia and Ichigo twins? I am asking out of curiosity, especially since through a set of event I will recieve twin brothers myself!

sincerly
cyne chapter 29 . 4/21/2009
ya know, if you switched some settings around and changed the characters names to something original, this would make a fantastic novel! Issues such as spousal abuse, especially when it is the male being abused, are hardly ever covered, and you hardly ever see anything to do with gay relationships unless there is lots of meaningless sex and at least one of the characters is flamboyant. Your story, however, is a breath of fresh air to say the least. Where you decide to go from here is up to you, but it would be an awful waste of a perfectly good plot to not try and make it original and see if you could get it published. Anywho, thanks for the gem! Can't wait to see what else you throw our way!

truly

cyne
Dahlia Franks chapter 28 . 4/9/2009
"Of Violence" Charmed me from the very beginning. I loved the strange dynamic between Rukia and Ichigo, Ichigo and Byakuya, and Ichigo and his family.

You did a marvelous job in decpicting the story and everyone's emotions and their reactions to the trials you presented them. Loved it.

You wrote an artfully done Romance Fic, that was not like any i've read before. The romance was tastefully done, and the journey that they had to embark on to get where they were at the end was enthralling.

Thanks for the wonderful read, I had an absolute blast. _

Dahlia
Taliath chapter 28 . 3/26/2009
Very well written. It was simply amazing. Excellent work. I'm glad to have read it.
Whitecloud1 chapter 28 . 3/11/2009
Your story telling is excellent. It made me cry, angry, sad, and even made me laugh. I stumbled across this story and I could not stop reading it until I got to the end. The way you wove all the pieces and the lives together-I could clearly see all of it in my mind. You were able to cover abuse from both points of view. It was simplified in some ways, but it was nicely covered. Baykuya and Ichigo's relationship was nicely told, and their love story was very sweet.

Thank you for sharing your story.
Tiger Eye2 chapter 28 . 2/16/2009
Wow, that was amazing.

Your part of that elite group that produces

beautiful pieces of literature. The emotions,

it was so real.

I love a good read like this. Thank you,

I'd definitely keep this on memo. Its so

beautiful.

Thank you.

TE
Ida Cippo chapter 28 . 1/15/2009
well so it is finally finished... somehow this was (even if it sounds clichée) the best end I think. Byakuya and Ichigo did get together and in shorter time than I had been expecting if Karin is still/barely alive.

And it is good that Rukia was reincarnated, and lives a happy life, it feels as if it should be.

For me all questions are answered, but I would be very interested in reading your FAQ, as I would love hearing how you came upon those ideas!

any stories of yours is worth reading! I shall be waiting impatiently
CrazyCartSalad chapter 28 . 1/15/2009
yeah, it was nice and all but I wanted a little more fluff...
MadaMag chapter 28 . 1/14/2009
You did a great job!

It's nice and a bit sad to see an ending for a fic. Nice, because it means the author wrote it to the end (had the idea and patience) and we, as readers got to know the end. Sad, because after so much waiting for new chapters it goes to end.

See you (read you?) next time!
Darklight14 chapter 28 . 1/14/2009
Hi Dracoqueen22:

I loved this story and enjoyed the way it ending. Everyone was OK and better off. I hope that you will write more since this story is finished. I was sad to see it end but I have to tell you I think that you did a wonderful job. This story had everything from love, denial, anger, just a little of everything. And the parining were incrediable. I am happy that I had a chance to read this story.

DL14
Mikamura chapter 28 . 1/13/2009
It's so sad and yet happy when a story ends, I followed this story and waited for the new chapters with both curiosity

and anxiety, and it was worth it,

I really love this story, its one of my favs and I will read it

again yes!

Thanks for the hard work you put in this story, my fav chara(of course after bya) was syaoran, and to think that she was to become the next kuchiki! kya! I wouldn't mind, or rather I would LOVE if you could make a story of her, her being being the new hair, the troubles, falling in love? gosh! .

truly, hope you consider it!

btw, I envy her *sighs*

anyways great story! Thanks again!
shogi chapter 28 . 1/13/2009
Ah... that was a lovely ending. Wrapping all the loose ends and even Rukia too. God I love Ichigo's kids... they're so awesome! XD

And Byakuya and Ichigo got married! Woot!

Wow. That was an absolutely brilliant read and I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you!
RadicalEd57 chapter 28 . 1/13/2009
Aw, I'm sad its over too, but all things must come to an end. Even the good things. *depressed sigh* Urahara was cute at the end there. If Ichigo ever had children I can imagine them all being like this. *is secretly hoping Kubo steals your story and turns it into Bleach spinoff; then you sue him and get a lot of money*

Anyhoo, I thoroughly enjoyed the story, even the awkward parts (such as Renji being stoopid) and the fun parts (such as Byakuya saying, "If you want me, you can have me." o) I squealed everytime I saw it updated.

Keep up the good work! I can't wait for your future works!
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