Reviews for Merry Early Christmas Edward
edwardsgirly4eva chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
Ummmm 13 and u wrote a lemon? Wow sweetie...
vampire chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
tut tut tut such a dirty little mind for a thirteen year old lol;)
Taylor Lautner Obsessed chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
NICE!

That's not a bad Lemon at all!

better than mine :)

Well done!
motherduckatschool chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Honey being 13 and writing this?

This is good stuff tust me.

Mild but good!

Loved it.

Motherduckatschool
jasmine AKA pifi1212 chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
love the smut its just kinda frustrating that she wont have sex when everyone is there lmao well for Edward i mean for the rest of us its kinda hilarious
pupp63 chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
That was a verry good story. I cant wait till you write more chapters
styling16 chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
from the way you write

i wouldn't believe that your only 13 now 14
jasperandjasmineforeva chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
hey! my name is jasmine but I'm 12 years old.
Ron Weasley's Gurrl chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
please please please do a renesmee and jacob lemon! please!
stupidlamb9 chapter 2 . 11/23/2008
about the written yells,its just that u should NOT know about this kind of stuff tell ur older,but yes i read 'happy birthday edward' it was good and so was this a little more detail then i think a 13 year old should have! but ur a great writer and i'm not telling you to stop writing,you have very good voice and actual problem is that even as a vampire Bella would be shy,i don't think that this is a very realistic story,cuz,well we r talking about BELLA CULLEN,aren't we?she is just not the same Bella we have all come to know and other then that good story.
stupidlamb9 chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
YOU ARE HOW OLD!HOW DO YOU KNOW ABOUT THE THINGS JUST WROTE ABOUT!WHO TOLD U TO WRITE LIKE THIS!U R ONLY A KID YOU SHOULDN'T KNOW ABOUT THIS STUFF!REALLY!WHERE DO YOU LIVE,CUZ U NEED TO GET OUT OF THERE FAST!DO U WATCH PORN OR SOMETHING?OME!
The Dark Lord Drama el Llama chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
Karma is a bitch. I swear, I must have murdered someone in a former life and it's all coming back to get me now...

Excellent Lemon!

*Rain
non o yo buisness chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
every body needs to be more domnate. chaining/handcuffing edward to the bed or something, more teasing

ite sexxy
twilightaddict13 chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
Damn! i LOVE it!
ItS jOhNnY-WaFfLe Yo chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
Whoa...

You're only 13 and you write lemons?

Wow...I thought that was young, but maybe I'm wrong...

Great story!

-*FrUiT-LoOpS-18*-
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