|Reviews for Merry Early Christmas Edward|
| ByeFanFiction2015 chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
Ummmm 13 and u wrote a lemon? Wow sweetie...
| vampire chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
tut tut tut such a dirty little mind for a thirteen year old lol;)
| Taylor Lautner Obsessed chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
That's not a bad Lemon at all!
better than mine :)
| motherduckatschool chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Honey being 13 and writing this?
This is good stuff tust me.
Mild but good!
| jasmine AKA pifi1212 chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
love the smut its just kinda frustrating that she wont have sex when everyone is there lmao well for Edward i mean for the rest of us its kinda hilarious
| pupp63 chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
That was a verry good story. I cant wait till you write more chapters
| styling16 chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
from the way you write
i wouldn't believe that your only 13 now 14
| jasperandjasmineforeva chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
hey! my name is jasmine but I'm 12 years old.
| Ron Weasley's Gurrl chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
please please please do a renesmee and jacob lemon! please!
| stupidlamb9 chapter 2 . 11/23/2008
about the written yells,its just that u should NOT know about this kind of stuff tell ur older,but yes i read 'happy birthday edward' it was good and so was this a little more detail then i think a 13 year old should have! but ur a great writer and i'm not telling you to stop writing,you have very good voice and actual problem is that even as a vampire Bella would be shy,i don't think that this is a very realistic story,cuz,well we r talking about BELLA CULLEN,aren't we?she is just not the same Bella we have all come to know and other then that good story.
| stupidlamb9 chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
YOU ARE HOW OLD!HOW DO YOU KNOW ABOUT THE THINGS JUST WROTE ABOUT!WHO TOLD U TO WRITE LIKE THIS!U R ONLY A KID YOU SHOULDN'T KNOW ABOUT THIS STUFF!REALLY!WHERE DO YOU LIVE,CUZ U NEED TO GET OUT OF THERE FAST!DO U WATCH PORN OR SOMETHING?OME!
| The Dark Lord Drama el Llama chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
Karma is a bitch. I swear, I must have murdered someone in a former life and it's all coming back to get me now...
| non o yo buisness chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
every body needs to be more domnate. chaining/handcuffing edward to the bed or something, more teasing
| twilightaddict13 chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
Damn! i LOVE it!
| ItS jOhNnY-WaFfLe Yo chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
You're only 13 and you write lemons?
Wow...I thought that was young, but maybe I'm wrong...