Reviews for An Overworked Captain
soulfullySoulful chapter 2 . 1/2/2012
A great story. A few mistakes here and there, but I loved it! Have fun and keep writing! And Happy 2012! ;D
CressidaRene chapter 2 . 8/8/2010
Awww, this was such a cute story, I just wish you would have expanded on it a little! I love stories about Hitsugaya, when someone has to take care of him! He tries so hard to be an adult, but he is still a child, and I so want to just give him a big hug, and let him enjoy himself, for once! I like the fact that you ended your story with Toshiro letting himself take it easy for a day.
FallenHope-Angel chapter 2 . 6/13/2009
ahh how cute. ilove lil shiro and think he needs to act like his self.
Evilhumour Author chapter 2 . 2/16/2009
aw
Master Bleach chapter 2 . 12/12/2008
9/10

Charming.
ShadowedDagger Rips Asunder chapter 2 . 5/4/2008
Dish ish tho cute! D'aw Hitsugaya!
Elf Hime of the Twilight chapter 2 . 5/1/2008
Aw... loved this story. It was so cute. 5/5 Good job.
RevolutionAngel chapter 2 . 4/24/2008
Wow, this is a great story! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Tony WildRiver chapter 2 . 4/23/2008
lol, Hitsugaya is certainly a stubborn one.
MokonaYi chapter 2 . 4/23/2008
wow!

I hope you can continue to write some other things!

This is really very sweet...

especially then scene where hitsu will run away from 4th division!

just tie him on the bed!

Thanks!
CO Raven chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
Though I'm not an official beta since I'm to lazy to type out my stories, I do occasionally do so for writers if you need it. Also, your writing is fairly good. On a technical point, you don't need that much help.
ShadowedDagger Rips Asunder chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
I like it. It very good for your first fanfic. I didn't spot any grammar/spelling errors that most new fanfic writers (well, some oldbies too) make. Good on ya.
CandleLight-Soul chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
Interesting..update soon...