Reviews for Cleaning Day Troubles
draco chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
Jajajaja very good
TheNiemand chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
LOL Good one haven't seen Catwoman but I have only heard bad thinks about it
Daki92 chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
saw it coming but still got me to chuckle a bit
Shrike176 chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
I really enjoyed Kim's mock outrage, nice to see she can be sensible about Ron's "cinematic interests". Though even someone as sloppy as Ron should have figured out he needed to hide certain things before having his girlfriend over to help go through his room.

Fun twist at the end!
mydirt09 chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
O burn.
ErnestTheGuy chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
o man i love it when Ron just gets cornered like that. and you are so right about Catwoman.

Hated that movie,

tymofey chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
Not quite what i expected, he he he xD
Mego ZT chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
haha That was great.
Bubbahotek chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
Hehehe, You had me fooled on that one. I was thinking more gutter ball

Nice one shot...Even though I wouldn't mind seeing a little more leather and lace from ol'

Jaster R chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
OMG the ending tottaly took me buy surprise! I wouldnt have guessed it was cat women, at first i thought it was some kinda drug by reading the discritiption, then when i read it it started to sound alot like porn but man did you fool me that was awesome! I feel outta my seat laughing when i read the last sentence.
LTAOZFAN chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
A beautifully done "surprise-twist-at-the-end" short story! You carefully let the readers think the plot is going THIS way, when it turns out to be going THAT way! Fun! And I like the notion that Ron appreciates the sight of Kim in her battlesuit . . . and Kim knows it, and likes the idea.

Maybe I'm the only one who remembers it, but back in the days of radio (you know, TV without pictures?) there was a comedy show called "Fibber McGee and Molly," and the way their hall closet got crowded with stuff was legendary. The sound effects when the closet door was opened were marvelous! And it seems to me that McGee's closet and Ron's room must be very similar places.


"Them's my views, amen, so be it."

"Treasure Island," by R. L. Stevenson
The Creeping Spleen chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
Bravo! Bravo!

Short, sweet and with a very nice humourous twist at the end.

But I really think Ron has a wee bit more taste than to actually buy a copy of "Catwoman". "Barbarella" perhaps. "Tomb Raider" maybe. But "Catwoman"?
spectre666 chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
This is a groaner, almost on a par with PRT's puns. :P Did not expect that little twist.
Captain IT chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
And now for Chapter 2..that which lurks under Rons a mission in itself.

Keep it kp real

Captain IT
noncynic chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
OK, didn't see the end coming. Though why Ron would buy his own copy with another in the house? And Kim's review was pretty much spot on, but nice of her to be so understanding of the reasons Ron had it.
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