Reviews for Undoing
Data Seeker chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Dear author

Sweet little fanfic.

More of a narration, then anything else; but nice go into Vala's thoughts and emotions and the senario she was going through.

The wholesome standards are high.

The langauge is clean.

Nothing suggestively offensive.

No extreme violence or any other vile content.

I hope this review has a good influence on you.

God bless.

Data Seeker
1477166 chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
AW! that was sad :( but really sweet
acer-sigma chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
Understandable that Vala would never willingly let her guard down, especially in front of anyone. Just goes to show that Daniel has really managed to get under her skin.
KateCayce chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
WOW! Some of mu favorite Vala moments were when she let her guard down, especially with Daniel.
starjems88 chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
dvshipper chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
Absolutely beautiful. Perfect characterization. :D
BlueEyedBrigadier chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
Yes! Now THIS is something I was hoping and praying for like a mofo for a long time (probably since the first episode we meet Vala in...Prometheus Unbound, right?) and you deliver it with some serious style, xfirefly9x!