|Reviews for Redemption|
| Guest chapter 13 . 4/11
What's Melody's second name?
| Vaneesa85 chapter 13 . 4/7
I liked it although I wish he could have saved Fred
| tigergirl chapter 13 . 2/1
Umm, sexist? Since when do tears make a woman weak? I have been raped, I have given birth, I have shed many tears. I am stronger because I can feel the pain and grieve and be human. People who don't let themselves feel and cry and be vulnerable are the weak ones. Or maybe just really immature and a bit ignorant. Raising a child alone IS tough, especially following such a trauma. Giving birth in a dirty basement while hiding from murderers and starving WOULD be rough.
Oh, and how did this critic of yours not see that she didn't actually tell her son about the rape until he stole her memories and watched them without permission? Of course she would have to explain things to him after that.
Please don't let idiots like that deter you from writing. I enjoy your work. What I DON'T enjoy are stories that are poorly written by people who lack maturity, creativity, and talent. Thankfully, there are people like you who give m hope that
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/20
Awww, so we're supposed to be feeling all sorry for the rapist and torturer now? Sorry, not buying it.
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/20
Because all women should forgive and love their rapists and torturers. Hermione needs mental help for trying to pretend that Draco raping her was a good thing.
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/20
If she could see him peeking at her and if she could detect a smile on his lips, then how is it possible that she couldn't TELL WHO HE IS? This is too unbelievable to be realistic.
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/25/2014
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/8/2014
wow, i'm crying and then smiling esp with the epilogues, so cute, don't worry, not everyone shares the 'really2 interesting comment' view , i don't think it's sexist, you portrayed hermione as a very strong, capable mother, the scene when draco meets wealey family was really emotional, really enjoys your story, thanks for the nicely written wonderful dramione ;) hope you wrotes more
| purple sky always chapter 12 . 10/25/2014
Very touching story.
| Mistress-Cinder chapter 12 . 8/9/2014
I loved Halen. What a strong intelligent beautiful boy!
| Brennda3 chapter 13 . 8/1/2014
Omf I love this fic so much
It has a great plot and the characters are pretty much to being in character
This goes perfectly well with Master
Keep up the good work
| L. Lee Anderson chapter 13 . 4/29/2014
Wow...all I can say is wow. A really well written follow up to a story you didn't even write! I must say I do agree with the letting Halen go with Draco is a bad idea. However, I'm not quite sure that your story was sexist. Rape is rather common in war and I'm sure Hermione would be "weak" from it. I have read other stores where rape of Bella forcing the person/people to do things to "do" things. It was a very well written sequel and now I'm off to hopefully read more of your fabulous work :) have a nice day :D
| romi chapter 13 . 3/27/2014
I think it was a wonderful story... I really enjoyed reading it and I think draco shoul've had a bigger role in the real hp.
| marthapreston4 chapter 4 . 3/21/2014
Okay confused why such bad parenting letting her son stay with a guy she barely knows. and if she know its her rapists no victim of a sex crime would EVER let thier kid stay with thier attacker
| Vox Mortis chapter 12 . 3/19/2014
I LOVED THIS! Amazing job on continuing with the Master fanfic! Plus I laughed for a like an hour after Draco suggested naming her "Dramione", that was pure genius!