Reviews for Excuse
ImLostForever chapter 9 . 10/15/2011
I wish there were another chapter, but I've thoroughly enjoyed the past nine anyway.
ImLostForever chapter 8 . 10/15/2011
What a twisted view on the Potters. I don't agree with it myself, but it fits well with the fic so far.
ImLostForever chapter 7 . 10/14/2011
This just keeps getting better and better! Love the House/Lily idea.
ImLostForever chapter 6 . 10/14/2011
Well written porn is always a pleasure. XD
ImLostForever chapter 5 . 10/13/2011
Loving this so much that I haven't been able to stop reading long enough to review!
IchigoRenji chapter 9 . 1/2/2010
Your Kidney chapter 9 . 9/17/2009
This story jumps around like woah and has a fuck-ton of holes, but it works for it. It's enjoyable and somehow its unconventionality works. 3

Nicely done.

- Your Kidney
RyuJin chapter 2 . 9/4/2009
Just to be fair, I've read two chapters before i posted this review. I don't know if story gets better later on, but for now I'll review this two chapters.

One, your story is slightly difficult to follow. It doesn't really flow together either and its choppy. Flow of story is sometimes more important then being grammatically correct. It felt like i was reading event by event description of drama on someone's high school senior term paper or police report instead of fantasy book. If that is your intent, good for you. But, i highly doubt too many people likes reading text books for fun.

Secondly, your Greg doesn't feel like when i am reading his dialogs. House is more sarcastic and witty. And due to your rigid writing style it definitely does not feel like I'm reading or watching House. It also doesn't feel like I'm reading or watching Harry Potter either. If that was your intent, then ignore this part.

Anyhow, here are two decent story of what i mean by feel of story. 4627586 and 5152527. First story was written by Russian, he has some spelling / grammar errors, but when you read his/her story it flows and it feels like House. second story is another cross over with Harry Potter and again, it feels like House.
PandoraSilk chapter 9 . 6/18/2009
Oh wow! Is House crazy to do that. I'm glad that the splinching didn't damage him more!

It's so sad that John can't express how he feels to his son. I love the ending. Strange dream indeed. Wonder how House will keep a straight face.

Can't wait for the next update!
PandoraSilk chapter 8 . 6/18/2009
Omg! I really hope that Draco and Greg's mom is going to be okay.

Poor Harry, he doesn't need to feel anymore guilt does he?

I hope that everyone can forgive each other when all this is over, and who on earth is behind all this? Scary scary!
PandoraSilk chapter 7 . 6/18/2009
So Greg's mom and Dad took care of Draco, who is now Drake who is Greg's brother now. I'm so glad that House's mom threatened his Dad not to hurt Draco like he did Greg.

So sad the whole thing with Snape.
PandoraSilk chapter 6 . 6/18/2009
Wow, that was an interesting chapter! LOL!

"Of course I used magical condoms," he snapped

I'd be interested to know what the difference is between magical ones and muggle ones! Do the magical ones zap the little guys or something! LOL!
PandoraSilk chapter 5 . 6/18/2009
Aw, it's too bad that House couldn't have gotten custody of Harry when he was young. How'd Harry get the limp? Probably from those bastard Muggles.

Poor Harry, never gets a break, does he?
PandoraSilk chapter 4 . 6/18/2009
Aw, where are those tissues. I'm so glad his mother stopped his bastard father from hurting him again, and that she threatened him. Abusive SOB.

Severus' eyes are grey in your story. Interesting. I wonder what he'd look like with gray eyes. Probably gorgeous.

How horrible for Greg to be tied down like an animal. I can only imagine how helpless he feels. I know that it's for his own good, but still how horrible to be out of control of your body like that.

One thing about your stories, is that it makes you really think hard about life and pain and despair, and good I have it. Phew. On to the next chapter.
PandoraSilk chapter 3 . 6/18/2009
Poor House. He's one messed up guy, isn't he? :o

So he gave up the world of magic. Just couldn't live without Lily and the others. How sad. He really tends to push others away who get too close. Reminds of Snape!

Hmm, what potion is he making?

You know after reading your other stories and this one, it never fails to amaze me how you just introduce magic into character's lives so effortlessly, as if they were really part of Harry's Potter's world to begin with.
28 | Page 1 2 Next »