|Reviews for First Day|
| WingedSmasher chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
in the name of the moon ill punish them X3
| Laura Schiller chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
Great story. You've hit Karen's and Jiiya's father-daughter dynamic perfectly, and provided a very believable and sweet scenario for Karen and Komachi's first meeting. Komachi's leaf story was also cute, and Karen's way of looking at the world. You obviously remember very well what it's like to be a child.
| Setsumi-san chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
Cute! I never considered how Komachi and Karen met before. Karen was very in-character too. Nice job.