|Reviews for Maraverse: The End. And the Beginning.|
| Protector of Canon2 chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
Wow. I was giggling through the entire thing. I am so glad my brother isn't here.
| Amethyst M chapter 1 . 12/3/2003
LOL! Great fic. I've enjoyed your series so far. I'll have to check back later for the rest.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2002
Confusing dad & about to serously injure Roy & Balis. Yup I thought my three psycopathic sisters & having gray hair since I was five was fun.
Best fics I've read yet so I think you should start a petition to either get it published, or turn it into a set of movies.
| Brendan Storm chapter 1 . 12/12/2001
yer a fiddler... you are such a fiddler! I read this when you first posted it to the bludhaven yahoogroups list, but you fiddled with it, that ending's diffrent, of course better, but diffrent.
Jordy and Mara are so cute.
| razor-flavoured candy chapter 1 . 10/2/2001
I came here to review this fic (which I read offline last night) and beg for more. I know how annoying this can be for authors, but I just can't help it! You've created so many new conflicts/complications and I'm very interested in seeing how all the characters - original and otherwise - deal with this new turn of events. Imagine my delight when I saw that you'd posted a part 11! (*dances for joy*) This is going to be an irritatingly long review, but I just have to say that I love the way you not only introduced new characters with this series, but modified the pre-existing ones by aging them and giving them a history that covers the nearly-20 years between cannon and your series. This worked so well in terms of how Mara, Jimmy, et al fit into the group dynamic. I know I've said it before, but thank you for this fantastic series.
| Ghost in the Machine chapter 1 . 10/1/2001
'want to waste', not 'want to waist' And you kept using 'poll' when you meant 'pool'. (Back at my old job,
they stopped inviting me into the football pools because I kept winning.) But those are just technical errors
that are easy to fix. Storywise, entertaining as always.
| Minde chapter 1 . 10/1/2001
Bravo. I've read the whole series now and I'm ansolutely in love with the alterna-DCU that you've created. More please, and often!
| Rick Peterson chapter 1 . 10/1/2001
I've been meaning to comment on these stories since the first one, but I'm habitually lazy and you are a fast writer. Such short waits between installments is a big treat, believe me. Since this one is my last chance to comment (for now), I had to tell you how much I enjoy these stories. You have the teenager thing down pat and you are really good at the "adults trying to understand teenagers" thing as well. I may not precisely agree with all of your characterizations of the DC crowd 16 years later, but they are reasonable and consistent and a lot of fun! You clearly know your characters very well and enjoy them. The result is one of the best series I have read. My only complaints are technical in nature. There are too many places where words are left out or the editing was clearly incomplete. Probably a consequence of the speed of composition, but it does tend to break the mood when the reader has to figure out what the sentence is supposed to be. Also, it is not always clear who is speaking. Again, this can break the mood of the story. But, overall, two enthusiastic thumbs up!
| Andrew Norris chapter 1 . 10/1/2001
Ah, yes, more maraverse. Poor Mara. She's got a boyfreind now, and -every- one knows it. Wonder how much is the poll on Jordy winning the fight with Baulis... :)
| Gaz chapter 1 . 10/1/2001
Done in front of Nightwing and he's still breathing?
| Facade chapter 1 . 10/1/2001
Booyah! does happy dance around the room Yippie. I love Jordy. Especially when he takes the direct approach. You said the end of the arc. But not the whole series I hope. Know you're busy so we can be patient! :)