Reviews for KeepAway
Roxy-KunXIII chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
ohmigod, so cute. 8D I love AkuRoku (not kidding, huge shipper X3) and I really liked this oneshot! :D I could definitely see Roxas like that. XD And you're not the only one, I didn't like him much either (same reason as you) but now he's my favorite character! (Seriously 3 him 8D) Ironic, in'it? XD Anyway, awesome-sauce job, I'mma check out your other fics. ;D

Roxas
Dragonfly chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
That was adorable :D You gets lots of muffins!

And..I..have...a...cherry red...slider...phone...*cough cough*
FinalFallenFantasy chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
M cookies... XD 'Text that' Go Axel! Roxa,s stop ignoring him; your phone's hopefully gonna die sooner than he is so devote more time to someone who will actually feel about you, rather than technology. Bwahahaha I loved this!
ZOMGbies chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
F.

That. Was. Cute.

It was also written well.

Keep it up!
Noah Hunter chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
I lol'd hard at this. xD Awesome job. It was hilarious and so cute. x3
Melodious Authoress chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
hahaha my teacher said that too. This was so cute! X3
Xaluar chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
Awwh that was dead cute xD

Axel & Roxas would be the most perfect couple ever

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Aly-Cooper chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
Lawl. That was soo funny! -still laughing while I type which is getting to be pretty hard- ...now where's my cookie? -demands it- J/K.
Lyxli chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
Hehe, this was cute! Roxas seemed kind of whiny in this one. P
Monkee Girl chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
That made me giggle! _
smileintears chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
this was awesome. it points out probably another good reason why i don't text. hell, i don't even use my cell phone that much.

at any rate, this was very well done. very easy to visualize and very good dialouge.

i loved it, keep writting!
Astolat Maiden chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
...AW! That was so adorable! I really can see Roxie with that phone!
darklove4ever chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
This was a funny story. I'm not a really big Axel/Roxas shipper, but this was very cute. Good job!