|Reviews for My StepBrother Sasuke|
| TWO FACED TROLL chapter 4 . 1/7
Wait a second, I thought flatworms were platehylminthus...
| buddyz chapter 6 . 12/13/2013
Ooo...please dont stop..I love your story and your character...
| RenjiRulez5986 chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
No flaming. Just constructive criticism.
Hinata is way too... icky... Her behaviour is OOC (in a bad way) and her temper is stupid and without stable reason.
Plainly put, this Hinata is somewhat irritating, and quick to judge.
But meh, it's just my opinion.
| TWO FACED TROLL chapter 6 . 12/9/2012
But please just finish this story first! and is you fictionpress pen name the same ? (answer if you still open this account :P)
| otakumaku18 chapter 6 . 11/23/2012
Please continue this story or give your info for fictionpress! Thank you!
| ugala5777 chapter 6 . 8/6/2011
What? WHAT! It was just getting good! D:
Well, at LEAST give us info on your fictionpress account!
| noway chapter 6 . 3/10/2011
You can't do this you...! Can I say what? quitting a good story like that out of fuck.
| KoolKatHatakex3 chapter 6 . 8/28/2010
Wait you gave NO adtitional info to your fictionpress work a link would be nice you know?:D I like your stories no need for naruto characters to make them great.
| yashi14 chapter 4 . 7/31/2010
hmmmm...i like th story. its different, hinata is different. i thot tht hinata wuld b wier in this story since she's bold n all, but she isnt. n th girl who gave th directions was karin wasnt it?
| otakuxfanxgirl chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
love it X3
| Rheabeth chapter 6 . 7/12/2010
Oh noes! You must continue writing this story! Please! It's really good and I think Hinata's character is just fine. I really like it and hope that you continue. :) Good luck with your fp stories too.
| TheBrokenQuill chapter 6 . 6/13/2010
3 I know that feeling.
Writing original fiction makes one feel more accomplished as compared to writing fan fiction.
Good luck! Never give up!
| SkywardShadow chapter 6 . 6/4/2010
Well, as much as I'm going to miss this story, you gotta do what you gotta do. Thanks for letting us know, and best of luck in the future.
| rain-dancer chapter 6 . 6/3/2010
I'm IN! As in I will read your stories on fiction press. BUT PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY! I love it! It's a lot like the situations i've known. By the way, what's your pen name on fiction press?
| DeviantSupaSoldier chapter 6 . 5/27/2010
I'll follow you, I read more fictionpress then fanfiction now anyway and I bet your stories ar going to be great :) what's your penname on fictionpress if you don't mind me asking