Reviews for Betrayed
rrainehanson14hotmail.com chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
so well written, even though it's short :) you may enjoy some of my stories! tell me what you think x x x
Galasriniel Anessathiel chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
I see this was posted a while ago now, but I had to review this :)

You've got Jal's feelings summed up just right, this is what I would imagine it would sound like in her head. It's so emotive, I love it.