|Reviews for Rebirth|
| dontcare89 chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
YAY NEW STORY! hahaah yay
GREAT description of the transformation! and i like what you did with her smell...somehow honey fits her haha
and hm changing luck could be cool...kinda wierd to think about cuz luck is just that, hahah luck, you cna't really affect it, but who knows, i'm sure you'll right it in wonderfully!
| Blush at Twilight chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
Can I tell you how much I love this story and how happy I am to see a sequel? Bring on the new Bella! The idea for her power sounds interesting...
Great to have you back!
| stinkybunny chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
good start. can't wait to see where you go with it. and you do edward's pov well.
| Moonglitter2 chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
I think her power should definitely be different than what others have made her power to be in their own fanfictions.
| isacz chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
omg! I LOVE it! great job! :);):)
| Panda-Pigeon chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
the luck idea is REALLY good.
| latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
I'm not crazy about the luck thing. Maybe the ability give herself good luck but not affect anyone else? Something to do with her mind and bloodlust. She had a big aversion to blood as a human and mind "powers" did not affect her either. But, this is a fanfic so anything is possible. :) Enjoyed the first chapter.
| starsturnintofire chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
OH LOVE IT.
| xxfranklymydearxx chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
oh yes i love this story already!
more more more!
| Lindsay chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
That was great for a start! and no, i dont think you need to read sweet escape to like this one!
| Alde chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
Great beginning to this story! I really like how you wrote Edward in this chapter.
When it comes to what power Bella should possess, I think it's important that you take into consideration what her strongest traits as a human was, because it's those that become enhanced and turn into a 'power' (in the books).
(Hope that makes sense, I'm kinda tired at the moment, and my English have a tendency of worsening when I am:P)
Looking forward to the next chapter)
| JSTEW chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
wow,update soon pls
| Music ADD chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
That must've been agony for Edward, I'm not sure about powers but I think the ability to read people's minds, like Edward, would be appropriate, she's very well tuned to what people think.
| Capricorn75 chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
So Bella can hear Edward's thoughts now? Is that her power?
| Daddy's Little Cannibal chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
Totally love it!
A lot better with all the corrections.
I knew you had it in you! :D
Thanks for the shoutout.
AND! Guess what!
My internet is down, so I'm actually at the side of my house writing this.
Score on me! :D
Shoot me an e-mail anytime.
Loves lotz! :D