NICE job, sis! I just love how the ending wound down to Dart's freedom - bittersweet but very, very satisfying. Dart was well portrayed, especially her thoughts about the Autobot vs. Decepticon attitude.

...and you remembered "Flamelet!" E! . I had nearly forgotten about Prowl's private nickname for Flamestrike.

*hugs*

shes just leaving

aww man, hope shell be safe

Nice chapter. I feel much sorrow for solarflare being so injured. And poor Dart, she's scared to death.

well their all back and ok

I d love to see Prowl anf Flame go on a vacation of sorts that would be amusing

frag man, never mess with Femmes

E! I've only seen the preview before now. Excellent work! I was sitting on the edge of my seat while reading Flare's battle scene.

More! More! :-)

lol and we begin

lol and thier off

Great story. I think you potray dart fairly well. Can't wait for an update.

Nice chap.

aw some bonding time for Flare and Raj

I wonder what's going to happen. Nice chap.

ekk I have a bad feeling about this

This sounds very interesting. Keep it up.