Reviews for Ziva and the Chocolate Factory
LunaChas chapter 1 . 10/22/2015
THnx for the first laugh of day
Craz Lollipop-Imp chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
anyone else just as freaked out by the new charlie and the chocolate factory? but ziva would have been. i digress, cute and funny
TheHoneymoonWasAnAdventure chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
A great story. Very funny.
Qoheleth chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Dear Lynnette:

You know what would be good with this story? Some dialogue. Some of that nice Tony-Ziva back-and-forth that we've all grown so accustomed to. There's potential for great humor here, but you've got to work with it some more.


Cable Addict chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Hahahahahahaha. Cute. Did he send her that e-mail?
ellameno chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
oompahloompahs are so awesome!
Skywriter11 chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
Perfect description of Tiva! I love it!

(This might also have to do with the fact that I love that movie)